Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题方向是“小时候有自行车”，但需要注意用词和时态：用“bike/bicycle”，不要说“bag”；讲过去的经历时用过去式“had/was”。“It is my 70 year”无法表达清楚，可直接说明这是几岁生日时收到的礼物。避免重复“I very like”，改为“I really liked…”，并用一句原因补充，例如它方便你上学，也更环保。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a birthday present, and I used to ride it to school. I really enjoyed cycling because it was convenient and environmentally friendly.

Sugerencia: 先直接回答“自行车在中国很受欢迎”，并使用“bikes”或“shared bikes”，不要误说“bags”。说明共享单车近几年在中国变得流行，可用“in recent years”表达“近几年”，用“has become popular”表达趋势。“每个人”应说“everyone”，并将手机操作说清楚，例如用手机扫码解锁。原回答在句中结束，请补完整句子，控制在2—3句。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. In recent years, many people have used them for short trips because they are convenient and eco-friendly. You can unlock one by scanning a code with your phone.

× Yes, I have a bag when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child.

句子说的是“小时候”的情况，时间在过去，因此应将 have 改为过去式 had。

× It is my 70 year.

✓ It was a gift from when I was 7 years old.

原句的表达结构不完整，无法清楚说明礼物与年龄的关系。可以用“a gift from when I was 7 years old”表达“我7岁时收到的礼物”。原句中的“70”具体想表达什么不够明确，因此此处按上下文可能的“7岁”理解。

× It is my 70 birthday, 70 old birthday gift.

✓ It was a birthday gift for my 7th birthday.

birthday gift 是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词 a；表示生日序数时应使用序数词，例如 7th，而不是 7 或 70。结合上下文，这里按“7岁生日”理解。

× I very like bike go to, I very like use bike go to school.

✓ I really like riding a bike to school.

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like；表达“非常喜欢”应使用 really like。原句中 use bike go to school 的动词结构也不自然；用 riding a bike to school 表达“骑车上学”更清楚。

× I very like bike go to, I very like use bike go to school.

✓ I really like riding a bike to school.

like 后面可以接动词-ing形式或 to do 形式。这里用 riding 表达喜欢骑车；不能直接把 use 和 go 连在一起。建议记住结构：like doing something 或 like to do something。

× It is protected environmental.

✓ It was environmentally friendly.

environmental 是形容词，不能直接放在这里修饰 protected；表达“环保的”可以用 environmentally friendly，其中 environmentally 是副词，用来修饰 friendly。由于上下文谈的是小时候的自行车，此处使用 was。

× Yes, I think bags are popular in China because bags sharing a green transportation trend is emergency in China Western years.

✓ Yes, I think bike sharing is a popular, emerging green transportation trend in China.

原句中 because 后面的结构混乱，无法形成清楚、完整的从句。可以把主语写成 bike sharing，谓语写成 is，再接名词短语 a popular, emerging green transportation trend。

× Every people can use only use phone to open the bag and

✓ Everyone can use a phone to unlock a shared bike.

every 后面应接单数名词，例如 every person；也可以直接用 everyone，不能说 every people。phone 是可数名词单数，前面需要加 a。原句末尾的 and 后没有后续内容，因此修改后的句子在完整意思处结束。

× Every people can use only use phone to open the bag and

✓ Everyone can use a phone to unlock a shared bike.

phone 是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词；这里应用 a phone。建议检查可数名词单数前是否缺少 a 或 the。