Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and complete your idea with a specific detail. Correct the grammar error in “I were” to “I was,” and avoid the unclear phrase “66 years old,” which is probably intended to mean “six or seven years old.” Also, replace fillers such as “like,” “umm,” and “uh” with a clear sentence. The answer should explain where you learned to ride or how you felt about your bike.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had my first bike when I was about six years old, and I learned to ride it in the park near my home. At first, I was nervous, but I soon became more confident.

Sugerencia: Give a clear answer first, then support it with accurate and specific information. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases such as “My country, Vietnamese Vietnam,” “motorbike and bike are the most,” and “They draw the street everywhere.” Use “In Vietnam, motorbikes are extremely common” and distinguish between bicycles and motorbikes. Add a reason or comparison, such as their convenience in crowded cities, and use a linking word such as “because” or “however.”

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in Vietnam, especially motorbikes. They are a convenient way to travel because the roads in many cities are crowded, and motorbikes can move through traffic more easily than cars. Bicycles are also common for exercise and short trips.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I were like, umm, 66 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was, like, six years old.

The subject I takes was, not were, in the past tense. Were is used with you, we, and they. In addition, six years old is the contextually appropriate expression for childhood; 66 appears to be a transcription error.

× I remember that was uh, a time when I started to learn how to ride a bike and, umm.

✓ I remember that it was the time when I started to learn how to ride a bike.

The clause after remember needs a subject. Add it before was: it was. The original sentence also ends with and, leaving the idea incomplete. Finish the sentence without the unnecessary conjunction.

× My country, Vietnamese Vietnam, where people drive motorbike, motorbike and bike are the most and you can easily see bikes everywhere.

✓ In my country, Vietnam, people drive motorbikes, and you can easily see motorbikes and bicycles everywhere.

The nouns motorbike and bike refer to vehicles in general, so they should be plural: motorbikes and bicycles. The country should be called Vietnam, not Vietnamese Vietnam. Use plural nouns when speaking generally about types of vehicles.

× My country, Vietnamese Vietnam, where people drive motorbike, motorbike and bike are the most and you can easily see bikes everywhere.

✓ In my country, Vietnam, motorbikes are very common, and you can easily see them everywhere.

The original sentence contains several clauses that are incorrectly connected, making the structure difficult to follow. Use a clear main clause, such as motorbikes are very common, and connect the second idea with and. The pronoun them clearly refers to motorbikes.