Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 質問にはまず「No, I didn’t.」と直接答えましょう。時制に注意し、「buy」は過去形の「bought」、「when I was in high school」のように表現してください。また、「I’m not good at driving the bicycle」は不自然なので、「I wasn’t good at riding a bike」と言います。最後の「So I have, don’t have」は重複しているため削除し、理由や簡単な経験を1文加えると、より自然で効果的です。

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I bought one when I was in high school because I wasn’t very good at riding a bike. However, I didn’t use it very often.

Sugerencia: 最初に「Yes, I think they are quite popular.」と明確に答え、その後に理由を説明しましょう。「rental stories」は「bike rental shops」または「bike-sharing services」に直し、「to bike to ride bike」は「ride bikes」に簡潔にします。「because」を重複して使わず、「This is because」や「For example」などの linking words を使って論理的につなげてください。また、「my friends often use bike」は「my friends often ride bikes」と表現し、人気の理由を具体的に説明するとよいでしょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. This is because many cities have bike-sharing services, which are convenient and affordable. For example, my friends often ride shared bikes to travel short distances or commute to work.

× I buy your bike when I, umm, in the high school.

✓ I bought a bike when I was in high school.

Because the speaker is describing a past experience, buy should be changed to the past-tense form bought. The clause when I was in high school also needs the past-tense verb was.

× I buy your bike when I, umm, in the high school.

✓ I bought a bike when I was in high school.

Use the indefinite article a before bike because the speaker is mentioning one nonspecific bike. Do not use the before high school when referring generally to the period of being a high-school student.

× So I have, don't have.

✓ So I do not have one now.

The original sentence contains an incomplete and confusing verb structure. Use do not have to form the negative present-tense sentence, and use one to avoid repeating bike.

× Oh so because there are a lot of bicycle rental stories so it is so popular in our country to bike to ride bike.

✓ There are many bicycle rental stores, so cycling is very popular in my country.

The original sentence contains two unnecessary connectors, oh so and because ... so, and the phrases to bike to ride bike are awkwardly combined. Use one clear cause-and-effect structure: There are ..., so ... .

× to ride bike

✓ to ride a bike

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike when referring to one bicycle in general.

× My friends often use bike.

✓ My friends often use bikes.

Because my friends refers to more than one person and they generally use more than one bicycle, the plural noun bikes is more appropriate than the singular noun bike.