Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly in the past tense: say whether you had a bike as a child. Use “I rode a bike” or “I had a bike,” not “I have been riding bicycle and childhood.” Avoid the unfinished ending and organize your response with a clear reason and a brief contrast with the present. Use natural expressions such as “feel the fresh air” and “feel the wind on my face.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode it almost every weekend. I enjoyed feeling the fresh air and the wind on my face. Nowadays, I prefer using public transport because it is more convenient.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Then support it with specific reasons, for example, they are affordable, convenient, and environmentally friendly. Avoid the unnatural phrase “electronic bicycle industry is prevalent”; say “electric bikes are widely used.” Check brand-name grammar by saying “Kakao Bike and Chikuto are popular brands,” and explain what “this” refers to.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially electric bikes. They are convenient for short trips and are cheaper to run than cars. In my town, brands such as Kakao Bike and Chikuto are widely used, and I often use them to get around.

× Yeah, I have been riding bicycle and childhood because I can feel some fresh air and on wind and I ride a bike but now I prefer

✓ Yeah, I rode a bicycle during my childhood because I could feel the fresh air and the wind. I used to ride a bike, but now I prefer walking.

The question asks about a past period, so past forms such as rode and could are more appropriate than have been riding and can. Used to ride is also suitable for a repeated past habit.

× Yeah, I have been riding bicycle and childhood because I can feel some fresh air and on wind and I ride a bike but now I prefer

✓ Yeah, I rode a bicycle during my childhood because I could feel the fresh air and the wind. I used to ride a bike, but now I prefer walking.

Use during before a period such as my childhood. The phrase on wind is incorrect; say the wind without on.

× Yeah, I have been riding bicycle and childhood because I can feel some fresh air and on wind and I ride a bike but now I prefer

✓ Yeah, I rode a bicycle during my childhood because I could feel the fresh air and the wind. I used to ride a bike, but now I prefer walking.

A singular countable noun such as bicycle needs an article, so say a bicycle. The nouns air and wind also need appropriate determiners in this context: the fresh air and the wind.

× Yeah, I have been riding bicycle and childhood because I can feel some fresh air and on wind and I ride a bike but now I prefer

✓ Yeah, I rode a bicycle during my childhood because I could feel the fresh air and the wind. I used to ride a bike, but now I prefer walking.

The original response is a long, incomplete run-on sentence and ends with prefer without an object or complement. Divide the ideas into complete sentences and state what you prefer.

× Yeah, right because some electronic bicycle industry is prevalent in my town such as Kako bike and Chikuto is really popular bicycle brand and I also usually use this

✓ Yeah, that's right, because the electric-bicycle industry is prevalent in my town. Brands such as Kako Bike and Chikuto are really popular, and I also usually use them.

Electric describes bicycles powered by electricity, whereas electronic usually describes devices involving electronic circuits. Use electric-bicycle industry in this context.

× Yeah, right because some electronic bicycle industry is prevalent in my town such as Kako bike and Chikuto is really popular bicycle brand and I also usually use this

✓ Yeah, that's right, because the electric-bicycle industry is prevalent in my town. Brands such as Kako Bike and Chikuto are really popular, and I also usually use them.

Because two brands are mentioned, use the plural noun brands rather than the singular phrase bicycle brand. The plural form makes the number of items clear.

× Yeah, right because some electronic bicycle industry is prevalent in my town such as Kako bike and Chikuto is really popular bicycle brand and I also usually use this

✓ Yeah, that's right, because the electric-bicycle industry is prevalent in my town. Brands such as Kako Bike and Chikuto are really popular, and I also usually use them.

This refers to one singular item, but Kako Bike and Chikuto refer to multiple brands or bicycles. Use the plural object pronoun them.

× Yeah, right because some electronic bicycle industry is prevalent in my town such as Kako bike and Chikuto is really popular bicycle brand and I also usually use this

✓ Yeah, that's right, because the electric-bicycle industry is prevalent in my town. Brands such as Kako Bike and Chikuto are really popular, and I also usually use them.

The original response joins several complete ideas with repeated and, which creates a run-on structure. Use a full stop to separate the main ideas and use and only where it appropriately joins related clauses.

× Yeah, right because some electronic bicycle industry is prevalent in my town such as Kako bike and Chikuto is really popular bicycle brand and I also usually use this

✓ Yeah, that's right, because the electric-bicycle industry is prevalent in my town. Brands such as Kako Bike and Chikuto are really popular, and I also usually use them.

Use the definite article the before electric-bicycle industry when referring to the industry in your town. A singular countable noun would also need an article, but the correction uses the plural noun brands instead.

× Yeah, right because some electronic bicycle industry is prevalent in my town such as Kako bike and Chikuto is really popular bicycle brand and I also usually use this

✓ Yeah, that's right, because the electric-bicycle industry is prevalent in my town. Brands such as Kako Bike and Chikuto are really popular, and I also usually use them.

The subject Brands is plural, so it must be followed by the plural verb are, not is. Always match the verb with the grammatical subject.