Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and separate your ideas into clear sentences. Use “older brother” instead of “elder blood brother,” and say “the color of the bike” rather than “the bike color.” Add a linking word such as “also” or “while” to connect the details naturally. Avoid repeating “bike” too often and use “ride it” when the meaning is clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got my first one when I was five, and it was red. I used to ride it with my older brother, who had a blue bike. We often rode around our neighborhood together.

Sugerencia: Give a clear answer about your country first, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Replace “not even in my country” with “not only in my country” or avoid the comparison altogether. Use “bikes are popular” instead of switching between singular and plural forms, and say “stay fit” rather than “be fit” in this context. Avoid the unnecessary phrase “with that bike” and improve coherence by using linking words such as “because,” “for example,” and “as a result.”

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and commuters. Many people use them because they are affordable and help them stay fit. For example, some commuters cycle to work instead of driving, particularly in cities with heavy traffic.

× Yes, I got my first bike when I was five years old I still remember the bike color it was red and I used to ride that bike with my elder blood brother and he got the blue one.

✓ Yes, I got my first bike when I was five years old. I still remember its color; it was red. I used to ride it with my older brother, who had the blue one.

The original response contains several independent clauses joined without full stops or suitable conjunctions, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the ideas into shorter sentences and use pronouns such as its and it to avoid unnecessary repetition. The phrase older brother is the natural expression for a brother who is older than you.

× Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country, not even in my country, it's popular all around the world because people used to travel from one place to another with that bike and in many of the countries some people prefer to travel by bike instead of car so that they can just be fit.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular not only in my country but also all around the world. People travel from one place to another by bike, and in many countries, some people prefer to travel by bike instead of by car so that they can stay fit.

Not even does not express the intended contrast. Use the conjunction pattern not only...but also to connect two places or ideas. Also, separate the long series of ideas into two sentences to make the relationship between them clearer.

× Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country, not even in my country, it's popular all around the world because people used to travel from one place to another with that bike and in many of the countries some people prefer to travel by bike instead of car so that they can just be fit.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular not only in my country but also all around the world. People travel from one place to another by bike, and in many countries, some people prefer to travel by bike instead of by car so that they can stay fit.

The subject bikes is plural, so it should be followed by the plural verb are and the plural pronoun they, not the singular form it is. Subject and verb must agree in number.

× Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country, not even in my country, it's popular all around the world because people used to travel from one place to another with that bike and in many of the countries some people prefer to travel by bike instead of car so that they can just be fit.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular not only in my country but also all around the world. People travel from one place to another by bike, and in many countries, some people prefer to travel by bike instead of by car so that they can stay fit.

The question asks about the current popularity of bikes. Therefore, use the present simple travel rather than used to travel, which describes a repeated action that happened in the past but does not happen now.

× Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country, not even in my country, it's popular all around the world because people used to travel from one place to another with that bike and in many of the countries some people prefer to travel by bike instead of car so that they can just be fit.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular not only in my country but also all around the world. People travel from one place to another by bike, and in many countries, some people prefer to travel by bike instead of by car so that they can stay fit.

Use many countries when speaking about countries in general. The definite article the is used with a specific, previously identified group of countries, not with a general plural noun.

× Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country, not even in my country, it's popular all around the world because people used to travel from one place to another with that bike and in many of the countries some people prefer to travel by bike instead of car so that they can just be fit.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular not only in my country but also all around the world. People travel from one place to another by bike, and in many countries, some people prefer to travel by bike instead of by car so that they can stay fit.

Car is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article when used in this structure. The natural expression is instead of by car, or instead of a car when referring to one particular vehicle.