Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，并提供了购买时间、颜色和价格等细节，但有明显的语法和搭配错误。应将“remembered”改为“remember”，因为这里是在陈述记忆；“write”应改为“ride”，表达“骑车”；“I cost about CN¥400 on it”应改为“It cost me about CN¥400”。建议使用“because”或“and”连接细节，并用更自然的开头直接回答。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was in junior high school. I often rode it to school because it was convenient and enjoyable. It was pink, and it cost my parents about 400 yuan.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但后半部分不完整，导致意思不清晰；“school bike gear”不是自然的英语表达。应先明确回答“Bikes are not very popular”，然后用一个完整句子说明原因，并进行对比，例如“most people prefer cars or public transportation”。可以使用“because”或“while”连接观点和原因，避免重复使用“yeah”和“'cause”。

Ejemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular among adults in my country because most people prefer to drive or take public transportation to work. However, bicycles are still quite common among students, especially those who live near their schools.

× Yes, I remembered I had one when I was in my junior high school.

✓ Yes, I remember that I had one when I was in junior high school.

“remembered”是过去式，但这里表示说话者现在仍然记得这件事，所以应使用一般现在时“remember”。“when I had one”表示拥有自行车的过去经历，因此使用过去时“had”。“junior high school”表示上初中时，通常不需要在前面加“my”。

× Yeah, it's a pink bike.

✓ Yeah, it was a pink bike.

问题询问的是童年时的自行车，描述过去的自行车时应使用过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。

× I cost about CN¥400 on it.

✓ It cost me about CN¥400.

原句的主语“I”不能表示自行车的价格。“cost”的正确句型是“物品 + cost + 人 + 金额”，所以应说“It cost me about CN¥400”。

× Whoa I don't think so 'cause most of us prefer to drive to work or school bike gear is more popular in student yeah 'cause they.

✓ Whoa, I don't think so, because most of us prefer to drive to work or school. Bikes are more popular among students, though, because they are convenient.

原句把多个意思连接在一起，缺少必要的句号和连接结构，形成了句子结构错误。应将不同意思分成两个完整句子。另外，“because they”后面缺少完整内容，因此补充“are convenient”使句子完整。

× Bikes are more popular in student.

✓ Bikes are more popular among students.

“student”表示复数群体时应使用复数“students”。这里谈的是“在学生群体中”，所以应使用“among students”，而不是“in student”。

× Bikes are more popular in student.

✓ Bikes are more popular among students.

表示“在某个群体当中”时，应使用介词“among”，所以“among students”比“in student”正确。