Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt vermeye çalışıyor; ancak zaman, fiil ve kelime seçiminde önemli hatalar var. “I hadn’t my bike” yerine “I didn’t have my own bike”, “I have a brother” yerine geçmiş zamana uygun olarak “I had a brother” ve “board a bike” yerine “bought a bike for my brother” kullanılmalı. “my brother” ve “bike” tekrarlarını azaltın. Cevabı iki veya üç net cümleyle düzenleyerek önce doğrudan yanıt verin, ardından bisikleti neden kendinizin kullanamadığını açıklayın.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. I had a brother, so my parents bought a bike for him and we shared it. However, I sometimes used it when he wasn’t riding it.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız tamamlanmadığı için fikriniz ve gerekçeniz yeterince anlaşılmıyor. “I think yes” yerine daha doğal olan “Yes, I think they are” ifadesini kullanın. “they are not play played” yapısı hatalıdır; “children often play in the streets” veya “many children use bikes to play outside” gibi doğru fiil yapıları kullanmalısınız. Dolgu ifadelerini (“uh”) ve tekrarları azaltın; önce görüşünüzü, sonra nedeninizi ve mümkünse kısa bir örneği belirtin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. They often ride their bikes in parks or quiet streets because cycling is a fun way to play outdoors. In addition, some adults use bikes to travel short distances.

× When I was a child, I hadn't my bike my own bike because I have a brother.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have my own bike because I had a brother.

The verb have must be formed with did not in the simple past: didn't have. Because the sentence refers to childhood, have should also be changed to the past tense had. The repeated phrase my bike my own bike should be reduced to my own bike.

× So my parents board a bike to my brother brother.

✓ So, my parents bought a bike for my brother.

The past form of buy is bought, not board. Since the sentence describes an event in the past, the verb must be in the simple past. The word brother is unnecessarily repeated.

× So my parents board a bike to my brother brother.

✓ So, my parents bought a bike for my brother.

Use the preposition for when explaining who received or benefited from something: bought a bike for my brother. The preposition to is not appropriate in this expression.

× I think yes, because, uh, in my country, uh, there are a lot of, there are so many boys and they are not play played in a street with other boys.

✓ I think so because, in my country, there are many boys, and they do not play in the street with other boys.

After do not, use the base form of the verb: do not play, not are not play or played. The present simple is appropriate because the student is describing a general situation in the country.

× I think yes, because, uh, in my country, uh, there are a lot of, there are so many boys and they are not play played in a street with other boys.

✓ I think so because, in my country, there are many boys, and they do not play in the street with other boys.

Use the definite article the when referring to the street as a shared or familiar public place: in the street. Also, the repeated phrases there are a lot of and there are so many should be reduced to one expression.

× So they, they have they.

✓ So, they have bikes.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words. A complete sentence needs a clear subject, a correctly used verb, and a meaningful complement. Here, they have bikes expresses the likely intended meaning.