Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then explain who taught you to ride and how you got the bike. Avoid incomplete phrases such as “when I was more” and “I had after that I have more by buying.” Use the past tense consistently: “gave,” “was,” and “bought.” Link your ideas with words such as “because,” “so,” and “later.” Try to give two or three specific details in no more than five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My father and grandfather taught me how to ride when I was about six years old, and they gave me my first bike as a birthday present. It was quite small, so I later bought a bigger one when I grew taller. I have many happy memories of riding it around my neighborhood.

Sugerencia: State your main idea clearly: bikes are not very popular in Hong Kong overall, although they may be more common in your district. Correct the grammar in phrases such as “limited roads that are designed for cycling” and avoid repetition like “in my.” Explain the contrast with a linking word such as “however.” Add a specific reason, such as heavy traffic, limited cycling lanes, or the natural environment in your district. Finish with a complete sentence instead of stopping at “they and a less.”

Ejemplo: I would say that bikes are not very popular in Hong Kong overall. There are limited cycling lanes, and the roads are often crowded with cars and buses, so cycling can be inconvenient and unsafe. However, bicycles are more common in my district because it is close to several natural areas and has quieter roads. People often ride there for exercise or leisure.

× Yes, I did and because when I was more my father and my grandfather, I tried to train me and develop with the biking skill.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was younger, my father and grandfather tried to train me and help me develop my cycling skills.

The conjunctions and and because are used together incorrectly, creating an incomplete and confusing clause. Use a full stop before When I was younger, or use because only when introducing a clear reason.

× I tried to train me.

✓ They tried to train me.

The subject of the sentence is my father and my grandfather, so the pronoun should be they, not I. The object pronoun me is correct because the training was directed at the speaker.

× Develop with the biking skill.

✓ Develop my cycling skills.

Develop is not normally followed by with when referring to an ability. Use develop plus a possessive noun, such as develop my cycling skills.

× So they just give it as a gift to me.

✓ So they gave it to me as a gift.

The question asks about a past childhood experience, so give must be changed to its past-tense form gave.

× I remember it is not as large as now.

✓ I remember that it was not as large as it is now.

The bike was smaller in the past, so was is needed for the past description. The phrase it is now correctly describes its current size.

× It was not as large as now.

✓ It was not as large as it is now.

The size of the bike should be compared with its current size, not directly with the time expression now. Use the complete comparison it is now.

× I had because I have after that I have more by buying.

✓ After that, I had a bigger bike because I bought one.

The original sentence contains several incomplete clauses and does not have a clear sentence structure. Arrange the ideas in a logical order: time expression, main clause, and reason.

× After that, I have more by buying.

✓ After that, I had a bigger bike because I bought one.

The experience happened in the past, so have and buy should be changed to had and bought. Bought is the past tense of buy.

× My study is Hong Kong.

✓ I study in Hong Kong.

Use the preposition in before a city when describing the place where someone studies. Also, study should be used as a verb with I, rather than as a noun in this sentence.

× There are limited road that designed for the cycling.

✓ There are a limited number of roads designed for cycling.

There are requires a plural noun, so road must be roads. The phrase a limited number of roads is a natural plural quantifier.

× Roads that designed for cycling.

✓ Roads that are designed for cycling.

The roads receive the action of being designed, so the passive voice is required. The passive structure is be plus the past participle: are designed.

× The cycling.

✓ Cycling.

Cycling is used here as an uncountable activity in general, so it does not normally need the definite article the.

× So not very popular but in my in my district because it is more near the kind of natural.

✓ Bikes are not very popular in general, but they are more popular in my district because it is closer to nature.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and a complete verb phrase. The corrected version has a subject, a verb, and clearly connected clauses.

× It is more near the kind of natural.

✓ It is closer to nature.

The comparative form of near is usually closer, not more near. Nature is also the correct noun in the expression closer to nature.

× So they and a less.

✓ So there are fewer bikes in some areas.

The original phrase has no complete verb and cannot function as a sentence. A complete sentence needs a subject or introductory there, a verb, and a meaningful complement.