Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt vermeye çalışıyor, ancak bazı ifadeler doğal değil ve anlamı belirsiz: “I had a ride, a bike” yerine “I had a bike” ve “my dad is help me” yerine “my dad helped me” kullanılmalı. Geçmişteki bir olaydan bahsettiğiniz için fiilleri geçmiş zamanda tutmalısınız. Ayrıca “7 H” ifadesi anlaşılmıyor; bunun yerine bisiklet sürmeyi öğrenirken yaşadığınız zorluğu açıkça belirtin. Cevabı bir neden veya kısa bir ayrıntıyla geliştirerek daha akıcı ve etkili hale getirebilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven. At first, I was nervous because I found it difficult to balance. However, my dad helped me practise, and I gradually became more confident.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız soruya “evet” diyerek doğrudan yanıt veriyor, fakat cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimleri sık sık hatalı. “My country is so popular” yerine “Bikes are very popular in my country” demelisiniz; “many teenage ride” yerine “many teenagers ride bikes” kullanılmalı. “Fashion” burada uygun değil; bisikletlerin popüler ve modaya uygun olduğunu söylemek için “trendy” veya “fashionable” kullanabilirsiniz. Bir neden ve örnek ekleyin; örneğin gençlerin bisikleti ulaşım veya egzersiz için kullandığını söyleyerek cevabı daha tutarlı hale getirebilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among teenagers. Many young people ride them because they are convenient and inexpensive. They are also a popular way to exercise and spend time with friends.

× I was 7 H and so terrible and I'm so nervous and my dad is help me.

✓ I was seven years old, and I was so scared and nervous. My dad helped me.

The answer describes a childhood experience, so the past tense is needed. Use was instead of am and helped instead of is help. Scared is more natural than terrible when describing how you felt.

× I was 7 H and so terrible and I'm so nervous and my dad is help me.

✓ I was seven years old, and I was so scared and nervous. My dad helped me.

Terrible usually describes a person or thing that is very bad, whereas scared describes a person's feeling. Use an adjective that accurately expresses your emotion.

× I was 7 H and so terrible and I'm so nervous and my dad is help me.

✓ I was seven years old, and I was so scared and nervous. My dad helped me.

The original sentence joins several incomplete or incorrectly connected parts. Use complete sentences with a subject and a correctly formed verb. Avoid connecting too many ideas with repeated and.

× Yeah, my, my country in so popular in like because teenagers so umm, well, so many teenage ride a bike and so popular and so, so fashion.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country because many teenagers ride bikes. They are fashionable, too.

The plural subject bikes requires the plural verb are. Also, many must be followed by a plural noun, so use teenagers rather than teenage. Make sure the subject and verb agree in every clause.

× Yeah, my, my country in so popular in like because teenagers so umm, well, so many teenage ride a bike and so popular and so, so fashion.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country because many teenagers ride bikes. They are fashionable, too.

Many is used with plural countable nouns. Therefore, use many teenagers, not many teenage. When speaking about people in general, use the plural form teenagers.

× Yeah, my, my country in so popular in like because teenagers so umm, well, so many teenage ride a bike and so popular and so, so fashion.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country because many teenagers ride bikes. They are fashionable, too.

Fashion is a noun, but an adjective is needed to describe bikes. Use fashionable. Also, very popular is the natural adjective phrase for describing how popular bikes are.

× Yeah, my, my country in so popular in like because teenagers so umm, well, so many teenage ride a bike and so popular and so, so fashion.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country because many teenagers ride bikes. They are fashionable, too.

The original answer contains incomplete clauses and an unclear word order. Begin with the main subject and verb: Bikes are very popular in my country. Then add the reason with because. Use short, complete sentences to make the answer clearer.