Bike— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-10-09 21:29:07

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I want a house to buy bag so my friend buy for me.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes I saw many people to buy bags after school.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.0Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Puntuación: 20.0

Sugerencia: 你的回答与问题有关,但句子结构和词义错误较多,导致意思不清楚。应直接回答“有/没有”,并使用正确的过去时,例如将“want”改为“wanted”,将“buy”改为“bought”。另外,“house”似乎不是你想表达的词;如果你想说“我想要一辆自行车”,应使用“wanted a bike”。可以补充一个简短细节,例如朋友什么时候或为什么买给你。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I really wanted one, so my friend bought it for me as a birthday present.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 35.0

Sugerencia: 你基本回答了“是”,但“saw many people to buy”搭配错误,应改为“saw many people riding bikes”或“saw many people buy bikes”。“bags”与问题不符,应使用“bikes”。为了让回答更完整,可以说明人们骑自行车的时间、地点或原因,并使用“because”连接理由。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see many students riding bikes after school because it is convenient and inexpensive.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue(过去时态错误)

× Yes, I want a house to buy bag so my friend buy for me.

✓ Yes, I wanted to buy a bike, so my friend bought one for me.

问题描述的是童年经历,因此应使用一般过去时:want 改为 wanted,buy 改为 bought。为了与题目保持一致,句中的 bike 也应与问题内容对应。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes, I want a house to buy bag so my friend buy for me.

✓ Yes, I wanted to buy a bike, so my friend bought one for me.

原句中“want a house to buy bag”结构不完整且语序混乱。表达“想买一辆自行车”应使用“wanted to buy a bike”;两个完整分句之间用 so 连接,并在 so 前加逗号。

6: Present tense issue(现在时态错误)

× Yes I saw many people to buy bags after school.

✓ Yes, I see many people riding bikes after school.

问题询问自行车现在是否流行,因此回答一般使用一般现在时:saw 改为 see。句首 Yes 后应加逗号。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes I saw many people to buy bags after school.

✓ Yes, I see many people riding bikes after school.

see 后面不能直接使用“people to buy”来表达看见人们进行某活动。可以使用“see + 人 + 动词-ing”结构,即“see many people riding bikes”。同时,句意应与自行车这一话题保持一致。

Vocabulario

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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