Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly and naturally, but avoid unnecessary repetition such as “I did have,” “like almost,” and “I really loved.” Use the correct phrase “a two-wheeled bicycle” and say “for two or three years” instead of “for like almost two to three years.” Your answer has good supporting details, especially about learning from your father and decorating the bike, but it could be more concise and polished.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a two-wheeled bicycle when I was a child. My dad taught me how to ride it, and I used it for about two or three years. I loved it because I decorated it with sparkly stickers, which made it feel special.

Sugerencia: State your main idea clearly and then support it with a specific reason or example. Correct the subject-verb agreement in “bikes... are popular” and replace “they’re much more rely” with “university students rely more on bicycles.” Avoid fillers such as “say for example” and “like,” and finish the final idea instead of ending with “or or.” Also, clarify that bicycles may be convenient and economical, although they are not necessarily faster than cars for every journey.

Ejemplo: Bikes are not very popular in my country overall, although many university students use them. They rely on bicycles because they are affordable and do not require petrol. In addition, bikes are convenient for short journeys, especially in crowded city areas.

× It was too wheeled bicycle.

✓ It was a two-wheeled bicycle.

The singular countable noun bicycle needs the indefinite article a. Also, two-wheeled is a compound adjective describing the bicycle; two, not too, is the correct word here.

× I would say bikes are not that popular in our country, but it is popular among the young people, say for example, who are like university students.

✓ I would say bikes are not that popular in our country, but they are popular among young people, especially university students.

Bikes is a plural noun, so it must be referred to with the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it. The revised sentence also removes the unnecessary expression who are like, which makes the example clearer.

× They're much more rely on bicycles because it is quite cheap and you can travel faster and it also doesn't require petrol or or.

✓ They rely much more on bicycles because bicycles are quite cheap, allow people to travel faster, and do not require petrol.

They're means they are, but are cannot be followed directly by the base verb rely in this sentence. Use They rely, or say They are much more reliant on bicycles. The sentence also needs a clear parallel structure: bicycles are cheap, allow people to travel faster, and do not require petrol. The repeated or creates an incomplete ending and should be removed.