Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan cevap veriyor ve bisikletiniz hakkında ayrıntı vermeye çalışıyorsunuz. Ancak “pink and lovely little white” ifadesi anlaşılır değil; bisikletin pembe ve beyaz olduğunu söylemek için “a lovely little pink-and-white bike” kullanmalısınız. “My grandma bought it” ve “that my grandma bought it” gibi yapıların birlikte kullanılması gereksizdir; “which my grandma bought for me” daha doğrudur. Ayrıca “lovely”, “lovely”, “good” ve “pretty” kelimelerinin tekrarı cevabı doğal olmayan ve gereksiz şekilde uzun hâle getiriyor. Daha net bir konu cümlesi ve bisikletin görünüşü ya da sizin için anlamı hakkında bir destekleyici ayrıntı kullanın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a lovely little pink-and-white bike that my grandmother bought for me. I used to ride it around my neighborhood, so it was a very special part of my childhood.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız görüşünüzü açıkça belirtiyor ve Hollanda ile karşılaştırma yaparak iyi bir destekleyici ayrıntı sunuyor. Ancak “bikes” çoğul olduğu için “they are popular” demelisiniz; “not as much as like” yerine “not as popular as in” kullanılmalı. Ülke adları “Germany” ve “the Netherlands” şeklindedir; “in the Netherlands” ifadesini kullanın. “All people, all age of people and all kinds of people” tekrarlı ve doğal olmayan bir ifadedir; bunun yerine “people of all ages and backgrounds” diyebilirsiniz. “Bike pathways that can they use” yerine “well-developed cycling paths that people can use” daha doğaldır. Cevabı iki veya üç net cümleye bölerek bağlaçlarla düzenleyin.

Ejemplo: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, although they are not as common as in countries such as Germany or the Netherlands. I lived in the Netherlands, where people of all ages cycled regularly because there were well-developed cycling paths throughout the cities. In my country, cycling is becoming more popular, but it is still mainly used for exercise rather than daily transport.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I really love it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really loved it.

The question refers to the past, and the speaker is describing how they felt about the bike at that time. Therefore, love should be changed to the past tense, loved. Keep the verb tense consistent when talking about past experiences.

× It was a pink and lovely little white.

✓ It was a lovely little pink-and-white bike.

The original sentence has an incorrect adjective order and is missing the noun bike. In English, opinion adjectives usually come before size and color adjectives: lovely little pink-and-white bike. Practice using the common adjective order: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, and noun.

× That my grandma bought it.

✓ That my grandma bought.

The relative pronoun that already functions as the object of bought, so the pronoun it is unnecessary. Do not use both an object relative pronoun and an additional object pronoun in the same clause.

× Yes, I think it is popular, but not as much as like the European countries like German or Holland and Netherland actually.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular, but not as popular as they are in European countries such as Germany and the Netherlands.

The phrase not as much as like is grammatically incorrect. To compare popularity, use not as popular as. Also, the comparison should be between bikes being popular in different places, so they are in European countries is needed. Use country names correctly: Germany, not German, and the Netherlands, not Holland and Netherland.

× Yes, I think it is popular.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular.

The noun bikes is plural, so it should be replaced by the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it. Make sure the pronoun agrees in number with the noun it refers to.

× All age of people and all kinds of people know how to bike.

✓ People of all ages and all kinds of people know how to ride bikes.

The expression all age is incorrect because age must be plural after all in this meaning. The natural expression is people of all ages. Also, ride bikes is the usual expression for using a bicycle; however, the main grammatical correction is changing age to ages.

× There are a lot of good bike pathways that can they use.

✓ There are a lot of good bike paths that they can use.

In a relative clause, the subject comes before the modal verb: they can use, not can they use. The word order should be subject + modal verb + main verb. The natural expression is bike paths, although pathways is also understandable.

× There's a lot of good bike pathways that can they use.

✓ There are a lot of good bike paths that they can use.

The noun phrase bike paths is plural, so the there-be structure requires are rather than is. Use there is with a singular noun and there are with a plural noun. The relative clause has also been corrected to the proper word order: they can use.