Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời đi thẳng vào câu hỏi và có thêm lý do, nhưng cần sửa thì quá khứ “have” thành “had” vì đang nói về thời thơ ấu. “The most amusement thing” dùng sai từ loại; nên dùng “the most enjoyable thing” hoặc “one of the most enjoyable gifts”. Ngoài ra, “during my childhood” bị lặp ý với “when I was a child”, nên chỉ cần dùng một cụm. Hãy diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn và bổ sung một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn như ai đã tặng xe hoặc bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was one of the most enjoyable gifts I received because I could ride it around my neighborhood with my friends. I still remember how excited I was when my parents gave it to me.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có quan điểm rõ ràng và đưa ra lý do phù hợp, nhưng phần cuối có lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt lặp: “have them help them commute” nên thay bằng “help people commute” hoặc “make it easier for people to commute”. “Streets are normally really small” có thể diễn đạt tự nhiên và chính xác hơn là “many streets are narrow, especially in crowded cities”. Bạn cũng nên thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về việc người dân dùng xe đạp để đi học, đi làm hoặc di chuyển trong những con hẻm nhỏ.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially in crowded cities. Many streets and alleys are narrow, so bicycles make it easier for people to get around and avoid traffic jams. For example, students often ride bikes to school because it is convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a bicycle and it's actually the most amusement thing that I ever received during my childhood.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bicycle, and it was actually the most amusing thing that I ever received during my childhood.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past, so use the past tense had instead of the present-tense form have. The verb be should also be in the past tense: it was, not it's.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a bicycle and it's actually the most amusement thing that I ever received during my childhood.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bicycle, and it was actually the most amusing thing that I ever received during my childhood.

Amusement is a noun, but a word describing a thing must be an adjective. Use amusing to describe the bicycle. Remember that -ing adjectives describe the quality or effect of something, while -ed adjectives usually describe a person's feeling.

× I live in Vietnam and streets are normally really small, so small vehicles such as bikes have them help them commute more effectively.

✓ I live in Vietnam, and the streets are normally really narrow, so small vehicles such as bikes help people commute more effectively.

The structure have them help them is grammatically incorrect and contains unclear pronoun references. Use the simple verb help followed by the object people. The phrase the streets is also more natural when referring to the streets in the country being discussed.