Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答基本没有直接说明“你小时候是否有自行车”，而是混淆了自己和妈妈的经历。建议先用明确的主题句回答，例如“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”然后补充一个具体原因或经历。注意过去时和主谓一致：用“had”而不是“have”，“wanted”而不是“want”，“every child”而不是“every children”，“didn’t”而不是“doesn’t”。此外，“have a strong desire to own one”和“ride it with my friends”比“have strong willing”和“play with my partners”更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike when I was about six because she had never had one as a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

Sugerencia: 回答没有完整的主语和谓语，也把“bikes”误说成了“bags”，导致意思不清。建议先直接回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”，再用具体人群、地点和用途支持观点。应使用自然搭配，例如“many people ride bikes to work or school”和“there are many bike shops”。“university students”应明确表达；如果想说学生放假，可以说“especially when they are on holiday”。同时减少“uh”和重复表达，并使用“because”或“for example”连接细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, especially in crowded cities. In my city, university students also use shared bikes to get around during their holidays.

× Of course I have back when were child

✓ Of course, I had one when I was a child.

问题发生在过去，所以要用一般过去时。have 应改为 had。when 后面需要完整的主语和谓语，were 前应加 I；child 前通常需要冠词 a。

× when were child

✓ when I was a child

从句缺少主语，were 前需要使用代词 I。表示“当我还是个孩子时”应说 when I was a child。

× my mom ... She want to a bicycle because every every children have it, but she doesn't.

✓ My mom wanted a bicycle because every child had one, but she didn’t.

这是描述过去的经历，因此 want、have 和 does not 都应使用过去时：wanted、had 和 did not。

× every every children have it

✓ every child had one

every 后面必须接单数可数名词，所以 children 应改为 child。one 用来代替前面提到的单数名词 bicycle，避免重复。

× So she have strong willing to have one

✓ So she had a strong desire to have one.

主语 she 是第三人称单数；在过去语境中，have 应改为过去式 had。strong willing 不是自然的英语表达，表示“强烈的愿望”可以说 a strong desire。

× So she have strong willing to have one and could ride the bicycle

✓ So she had a strong desire to have one and could ride the bicycle.

整段内容讲的是过去的情况，因此 have 要改为 had。情态动词 could 后面接动词原形 ride，这部分用法正确。

× Of course, popular in my country

✓ Of course, bikes are popular in my country.

原句缺少谓语动词。主语是复数 bikes，所以应使用 are，构成完整句子。

× have many shops sell bags

✓ There are many shops that sell bikes.

表达“有许多商店”时，应使用 There are，而不能直接使用 have。many shops 是复数，所以使用 There are。

× have many shops sell bags

✓ There are many shops that sell bikes.

原句把 have、shops 和 sell 直接连接在一起，句子结构不完整。可以使用 that sell bikes 作为定语从句，修饰 shops。

× I saw many people's ... go to company, go to school.

✓ I see many people riding bikes to work and school.

题目询问的是现在普遍存在的情况，所以一般现在时 see 比过去式 saw 更合适。表示“看见某人正在做某事”可以使用 see + 人 + 动词-ing 形式。

× many people's ... go to company, go to school

✓ many people riding bikes to work and school

many 后面应接复数名词 people，而 people’s 是所有格形式，不能在这里表示“许多人”。另外，people 后面使用 riding 可以表达“许多人骑车”。

× go to company, go to school

✓ riding bikes to work and school

英语中通常说 go to work，而不是 go to company。表示去工作和上学时，可以说 to work and school。

× And in my city, uh, uh, the UNI students, uh, separate for holiday.

✓ In my city, university students use bikes during the holidays.

原句中的主语、动词和宾语搭配不完整，separate 不能清楚表达学生与自行车的关系。可以重新组织句子，使用 university students 作主语，use bikes 作谓语和宾语。