Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi của giám khảo và bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi dưới dạng câu hỏi khác. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời rõ ràng như “Yes, I did” hoặc “No, I didn’t”, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn như bạn sử dụng xe đạp ở đâu và với ai. Tránh hỏi ngược lại giám khảo.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi khiến ý nghĩa không rõ, đặc biệt là việc nhầm giữa “bikes” và “guys”. Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp rằng xe đạp có phổ biến hay không, rồi giải thích bằng lý do cụ thể. Hãy dùng cấu trúc đơn giản và mạch lạc: ý kiến + lý do + ví dụ. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý chia động từ, danh từ số nhiều và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh; “people” hoặc “students” phù hợp hơn “guys” trong câu này, còn “sheep work” có vẻ là lỗi dùng từ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people living in rural areas. They are affordable and convenient for travelling short distances. For example, many students ride their bikes to school every day.

× but not bikes

✓ but bikes are

The phrase but not bikes is an incomplete sentence because it does not contain a verb. Add are to complete the contrast: but bikes are.

× I most guys are very popular country

✓ Most guys in my country use bikes.

The preposition in is needed before my country because it indicates location. The original sentence also needs a clearer verb structure.

× I most guys are very popular country

✓ Most guys in my country use bikes.

The words I, most guys, are, and country are not arranged into a complete and meaningful sentence. Use the structure subject + verb + object: Most guys use bikes.

× He use this everything from the sheep work to study

✓ He uses it for everything, from work to studying.

With the third-person singular subject he, the verb use must become uses. The pronoun it refers to the bike, and studying is used after the preposition to in the expression from work to studying.

× He use this everything from the sheep work to study

✓ They use them for everything, from work to studying.

The pronouns must agree with the intended plural subjects and object. Use they for most guys and them for bikes. This also avoids using this incorrectly for a plural object.

× He use this everything from the sheep work to study

✓ They use them for everything, from work to studying.

The verb use needs the preposition for before the purpose or activity: use something for everything. The phrase from work to studying also correctly connects the two activities.

× He use this everything from the sheep work to study

✓ They use them for everything, from work to studying.

In the pattern from ... to ..., the two items should be parallel. Because to functions as a preposition here, use the gerund studying rather than the base form study.