Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm: dùng “when you was” thay vì “when I was”, “I have” thay vì “I had”, và “a bite” có thể là lỗi phát âm của “a bike”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề ở thì quá khứ, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ đệm như “uh” và dùng đại từ đúng: “my parents bought it for me”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a beautiful blue bike that my parents bought for me. I rode it to school and around my neighborhood almost every day.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có quan điểm rõ ràng nhưng phần giải thích chưa hoàn chỉnh và khó hiểu. Cần sửa “in my country is very large” thành “my country is very large” hoặc diễn đạt cụ thể hơn như “the distances between places are quite long”; sửa “you ride by there” thành “it is difficult to travel by bike”. Hãy hoàn thành ý về đường sá và dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “also” để liên kết lý do. Nên đưa ra một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn giao thông đông đúc, khoảng cách xa hoặc đường không an toàn.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. The country is quite large, and many people have to travel long distances, so they prefer using motorbikes or cars. In addition, some roads are too busy or unsafe for cycling.

× when you was a child

✓ When I was a child

The student is talking about their own childhood, so the subject pronoun should be I, not you. Use I when referring to yourself.

× I have a bite

✓ I had a bike

The question asks about a past period, so the simple past form had is needed instead of have. Bike is also the correct word for the vehicle being discussed.

× And my parents bought for me to ride every day.

✓ My parents bought a bike for me to ride every day.

The verb bought needs a direct object. Add a bike to show what the parents bought. A complete sentence should also begin directly with My parents unless the conjunction is needed to connect it to a previous sentence.

× In my country is very large

✓ My country is very large.

The sentence incorrectly begins with the prepositional phrase In my country and then omits the subject. My country should be the subject of the verb is.

× you ride by there

✓ you ride there

There is used as an adverb of place, so the preposition by is unnecessary in this expression. Use ride there to mean travel to or in that place.

× you ride there, it is very hard to know.

✓ If you ride there, it is very difficult.

The original sentence needs a conjunction to show the condition. Use if before you ride there. Also, difficult is the appropriate adjective to describe the activity.

× The road and.

✓ The roads are difficult to ride on.

The original phrase is incomplete because it has no main verb and ends with the conjunction and. Add the verb are and complete the idea with a suitable complement.