Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cümlenin temel yapısı hatalı. “Have” fiilinin geçmiş zamanı “had” olduğu için “I was had” yerine “I had” kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca cevabı bir neden veya kısa bir ayrıntıyla genişleterek daha doğal ve etkili hâle getirin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially at weekends.

Sugerencia: Ana fikriniz anlaşılır, ancak cümlede dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. “I don't see bike usually” yerine “I don't often see people riding bikes” veya “I don't see many bikes” deyin; “bike” ve “football” karşılaştırmasında “more popular than cycling” yapısını kullanın. Fikirlerinizi bağlamak için “because” ve “whereas” gibi bağlaçları doğru şekilde kullanın ve ülkenizden kısa, spesifik bir gözlem ekleyin.

Ejemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because I don't often see people commuting by bicycle. Football is much more popular, whereas cycling is mainly used for exercise or short trips.

× I was had a bike when I was a child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The verb had is already the past-tense form of have, so was is unnecessary and incorrect here. Use had to express possession in the past.

× I don't think so because I don't see bike usually I think football is more popular than bike is in my country.

✓ I don't think so because I don't usually see bikes. I think football is more popular than bikes in my country.

When talking about bikes in general, use the plural form bikes rather than the singular form bike. The plural form is more natural when referring to vehicles generally.

× I don't think so because I don't see bike usually I think football is more popular than bike is in my country.

✓ I don't think so because I don't usually see bikes. I think football is more popular than bikes in my country.

The adverb usually should normally come before the main verb see, not after its object. The natural word order is I don't usually see bikes.

× I don't think so because I don't see bike usually I think football is more popular than bike is in my country.

✓ I don't think so because I don't usually see bikes. I think football is more popular than cycling in my country.

Football is a sport, whereas a bike is a vehicle, so they are not suitable comparison objects. Use cycling, which refers to the sport or activity, to compare it with football.

× I don't think so because I don't see bike usually I think football is more popular than bike is in my country.

✓ I don't think so because I don't usually see bikes. I think football is more popular than cycling in my country.

The original answer combines several independent ideas without proper punctuation or a conjunction. Separate the ideas into two sentences to make the structure clear and grammatically complete.