Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and organize your response into a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Use the past tense consistently: say “liked” instead of “like,” “taught” instead of “are teach,” and “when I was a child” rather than repeating unnecessary phrases. Avoid unfinished or repeated ideas such as “So my father.” Add one specific detail about where you rode or how you felt. Linking words such as “because” and “also” can make the answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I loved riding my bike around the countryside near my home. My father and older brother taught me how to ride, so I often went cycling with them at weekends. It was a fun way to spend time with my family and enjoy the fresh air.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion at the beginning and support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid contradictory and unclear statements such as “it’s not popular” followed by “it used to be popular in the future”; use either “it may become more popular in the future” or explain the past situation separately. Use natural expressions such as “in the morning” and “cycling is not very common.” Reduce repetition and self-correction, and connect your ideas with “although,” “because,” or “however.”

Ejemplo: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in large cities, because people usually prefer motorbikes or cars. However, some families still enjoy cycling together in the morning, as I do with my father and brother. I think cycling may become more popular in the future if cities build more dedicated bike lanes.

× Yes, of course, when I was a child, I really like to ride a bicycle all around my countryside and my father and my brother are teach me for that.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, I really liked riding a bicycle around the countryside, and my father and my brother taught me how to ride it.

The question asks about a past time, so the past-tense forms liked and taught are needed. The phrase are teach is grammatically incorrect; taught is the correct past form of teach. Also, liked riding is a natural verb pattern in this context.

× all around my countryside

✓ around the countryside

Countryside is normally used as a general geographical noun with the definite article the. My countryside is not natural in this context unless you are referring to a specific countryside that belongs to you.

× So I really love to ride it back.

✓ So I really loved riding it.

Because you are describing your childhood, love should be changed to the past tense loved. The word back is unnecessary here and changes the meaning; riding it is sufficient.

× So my father.

✓ My father taught me how to ride it.

So my father is an incomplete sentence because it does not contain a complete verb phrase or express a complete idea. Use a full sentence such as My father taught me how to ride it.

× I think it's not popular at all

✓ I do not think bikes are popular at all

The subject bikes is plural, so it should not be used to refer to it. Use the plural noun bikes with the plural verb are. The form I do not think is also clearer and more natural here.

× we can cycle at the morning

✓ we can cycle in the morning

Use the preposition in with parts of the day: in the morning, in the afternoon, and in the evening. At is not used in this expression.

× So it's it's say that it's not popular

✓ So I would say that bikes are not popular

The phrase it's it's say is not a correct English sentence structure. Use the subject I followed by would say to express an opinion. Since bikes is plural, use are not popular rather than it's not popular.

× but it's used to be popular in the future

✓ but they used to be popular in the past

Used to describes a past situation or habit, so it cannot be combined with in the future. Use in the past instead. They refers correctly to the plural noun bikes.