Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then add one or two specific details. Improve natural phrasing and grammar: say “gave it to me” instead of “gifted it to me,” “on a daily basis” instead of “on my daily basis,” and “it was great for my physical fitness” instead of “it was a greater.” Use parallel structure such as “helped me improve my balance and become more independent,” and avoid the unnecessary phrase “in a future.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me for my eighth birthday, and I rode it almost every day. It was great for my fitness and helped me improve my balance and become more independent.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Correct the grammar: use “prevalent” without “a,” “everyone ... learns,” and “than” rather than “then.” Explain the reason clearly by saying that bikes are more affordable than other forms of transport, especially for middle-class families. Use a linking word such as “because” or “therefore” and avoid repeating “mode of transportation.”

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. People usually learn to ride them at a young age because they are more affordable than other forms of transportation. They are especially common among middle-class families, who often use them for short trips and commuting.

× My father gifted it to me on my eighth birthday and I used it on my daily basis to ride as it was a greater for my physical fitness as well as helped me to learn how to balance and become more independent in a future.

✓ My father gifted it to me on my eighth birthday, and I used it on a daily basis because it was beneficial for my physical fitness and helped me learn how to balance and become more independent in the future.

The correct expression is on a daily basis, not on my daily basis. The article a is required before daily basis. Use because to introduce the reason more clearly. Suggestion: Learn common fixed expressions such as on a daily basis, in the future, and at the weekend.

× My father gifted it to me on my eighth birthday and I used it on my daily basis to ride as it was a greater for my physical fitness as well as helped me to learn how to balance and become more independent in a future.

✓ My father gifted it to me on my eighth birthday, and I used it on a daily basis because it was beneficial for my physical fitness and helped me learn how to balance and become more independent in the future.

The phrase a greater is incomplete because greater normally compares one thing with another and cannot be used as a noun in this sentence. The structure as it was a greater for my physical fitness is therefore incorrect. Use an adjective such as beneficial and coordinate the verbs was and helped correctly. Suggestion: Check that every noun phrase is complete and use parallel verb structures after conjunctions.

× My father gifted it to me on my eighth birthday and I used it on my daily basis to ride as it was a greater for my physical fitness as well as helped me to learn how to balance and become more independent in a future.

✓ My father gifted it to me on my eighth birthday, and I used it on a daily basis because it was beneficial for my physical fitness and helped me learn how to balance and become more independent in the future.

The fixed expression is in the future, not in a future. The definite article the is used because future refers to the general time after the present. Suggestion: Memorize common article combinations, especially in the future, in the past, and in the present.

× My father gifted it to me on my eighth birthday and I used it on my daily basis to ride as it was a greater for my physical fitness as well as helped me to learn how to balance and become more independent in a future.

✓ My father gifted it to me on my eighth birthday, and I used it on a daily basis because it was beneficial for my physical fitness and helped me learn how to balance and become more independent in the future.

The expression is on a daily basis, so the indefinite article a is needed before daily basis. Also, in the future requires the definite article the. Suggestion: Pay attention to articles in fixed phrases and review whether a noun is singular, countable, and specific.

× Definitely the bikes are a prevalent in my nation as everyone from an early age learn to ride a bike because it is a more affordable mode of transportation then others and middle class families also for this mode of transportation.

✓ Definitely, bikes are prevalent in my country because everyone learns to ride a bike from an early age. Bikes are a more affordable mode of transportation than other modes, and middle-class families also prefer this form of transportation.

The plural noun bikes is being used generally, so it does not need the. The adjective prevalent cannot be preceded by a in this sentence because it is not a singular countable noun. Suggestion: Do not use a or an before adjectives unless a singular countable noun follows, as in a prevalent form of transportation.

× Definitely the bikes are a prevalent in my nation as everyone from an early age learn to ride a bike because it is a more affordable mode of transportation then others and middle class families also for this mode of transportation.

✓ Definitely, bikes are prevalent in my country because everyone learns to ride a bike from an early age. Bikes are a more affordable mode of transportation than other modes, and middle-class families also prefer this form of transportation.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so it must be followed by learns, not learn. Suggestion: Treat indefinite pronouns such as everyone, someone, nobody, and each as singular subjects and use a singular verb with them.

× Definitely the bikes are a prevalent in my nation as everyone from an early age learn to ride a bike because it is a more affordable mode of transportation then others and middle class families also for this mode of transportation.

✓ Definitely, bikes are prevalent in my country because everyone learns to ride a bike from an early age. Bikes are a more affordable mode of transportation than other modes, and middle-class families also prefer this form of transportation.

The comparative form more affordable must be followed by than, not then. Then refers to time or sequence, whereas than introduces a comparison. Suggestion: Remember the distinction: than is used for comparisons, while then is used for time or order.

× Definitely the bikes are a prevalent in my nation as everyone from an early age learn to ride a bike because it is a more affordable mode of transportation then others and middle class families also for this mode of transportation.

✓ Definitely, bikes are prevalent in my country because everyone learns to ride a bike from an early age. Bikes are a more affordable mode of transportation than other modes, and middle-class families also prefer this form of transportation.

The final part, middle class families also for this mode of transportation, does not contain a main verb. Adding prefer creates a complete clause: middle-class families also prefer this form of transportation. Suggestion: Check every clause to make sure it contains a subject and a correctly conjugated verb.