Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, and my dad taught me how to ride a bike. That was very funny.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Umm, I don't think so because there was so many people take a motor.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 78.0Sugerencia: 回答直接,提到了父亲教你骑车这一具体细节,结构基本清楚。不过,“That was very funny”表达不太自然,因为学习骑车通常是“有趣”或“令人难忘”,而不是“滑稽”。可以使用“fun”或“a memorable experience”,并补充一个具体结果,例如你花了多久学会或是否摔倒过。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My dad taught me how to ride a bike when I was about six, and it was a really fun experience. I fell over a few times at first, but I eventually learned how to ride on my own.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 你的观点很直接,也给出了原因,但语法和用词需要改进。“there was so many people”应改为“there are not many people”或“many people”;“take a motor”不符合英语习惯,可以说“ride motorcycles”或“use cars and public transport”。此外,最好使用现在时谈论当前情况,并补充具体原因,例如交通便利、天气或道路安全问题。
Ejemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer to ride motorcycles or drive cars. They are faster and more convenient, especially in large cities. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people who want to stay fit.
× Umm, I don't think so because there was so many people take a motor.
✓ Umm, I don't think so because there are so many people who ride motorcycles.
“people”是复数,因此不能使用“there was”,应使用“there are”。另外,“people take a motor”后面缺少连接词,使用“who”引导定语从句更符合英语语法。由于问题询问的是现在的情况,所以使用现在时“there are”。
× Umm, I don't think so because there was so many people take a motor.
✓ Umm, I don't think so because there are so many people who ride motorcycles.
“there was so many people take a motor”中的“people”和“take”之间缺少必要的连接结构。可以使用“who ride motorcycles”构成定语从句,表示“骑摩托车的人很多”。此外,“ride motorcycles”比“take a motor”更自然、准确。