Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and explain when or why you had the bike. Several phrases are unclear, such as “I have a price,” “when I was charged,” and “to miss grandpa's days.” Use simple, accurate sentences instead of repeating “because” and hesitating. You could mention who bought the bike, when you received it, and how you used it. Keep the answer to two or three connected sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about eight because I really wanted one. I used to ride it around my neighborhood and sometimes visit my grandparents on it.

Sugerencia: State your opinion clearly and give one or two specific reasons. The answer contains many unclear words and repetitions, including “I sing buys,” “Parkisha,” and “advice is a resolution,” so the meaning is difficult to follow. Use linking words such as “because” and “also” only when they connect complete ideas. Mention who commonly rides bikes and explain a clear benefit, such as exercise or convenient transportation.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. Many people ride them because cycling is a healthy and inexpensive way to travel. In addition, children often use bikes to play with their friends in their neighborhoods.

× I have a price when I was charged because I want to buy.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child because I wanted to buy one.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past tense. Change have to had and want to wanted. The pronoun one avoids repeating bike.

× My parents bought a boat, a bike, to miss grandpa's days.

✓ My parents also bought a bike to celebrate my grandpa's birthday.

Bought is correctly used in the past tense. However, to miss does not express the intended meaning. Use to celebrate if you mean that the bike was connected with a special family occasion.

× I sing buys uh Parkisha in country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

Use bikes because you are talking about bicycles in general. The plural noun bikes agrees with the general meaning of the question. Also, think is the correct verb in this context.

× Because buys is important for children.

✓ Because bikes are important for children.

Use the present-tense form are because the subject bikes is plural. The word buys is a verb, but the sentence requires the plural noun bikes.

× Bikes is important for children, children's also health.

✓ Bikes are important for children's health.

Use for to show the relationship between bikes and health. Use the possessive form children's before health because the health belongs to or concerns children. Also, use are with the plural subject bikes.

× Children's also health advice also hereby because advice is a resolution.

✓ Bikes are also good for children's health because riding a bike is a healthy form of exercise.

The original words are not arranged into a complete, clear sentence. A complete sentence needs a subject, a suitable verb, and logically connected information. The revised sentence expresses the reason clearly and naturally.