Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng bị lặp từ nhiều lần ("I used", "after my mom") và kết thúc dang dở. Em nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu hoàn chỉnh, sau đó giải thích rằng chiếc xe ban đầu có bốn bánh vì em chưa biết đi xe đạp. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán và hoàn thiện ý cuối, ví dụ: “My mother taught me how to ride it.” Có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về độ tuổi hoặc cảm xúc để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle with training wheels at first because I didn’t know how to ride one. My mother taught me when I was about six, and I gradually became confident enough to ride without them.

Sugerencia: Em đã đưa ra quan điểm và lý do, nhưng cần sửa cấu trúc “I think no” thành “I don’t think so” hoặc “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular.” Cụm “tend to let go by” không tự nhiên; nên dùng “tend to travel by” hoặc “prefer to use”. Em cũng cần tránh lặp từ “other” và dùng từ đúng như “vehicles”, “public transport” và “plane” (nếu muốn nói máy bay). Hãy sắp xếp câu trả lời theo cấu trúc quan điểm → lý do → ví dụ cụ thể, đồng thời dùng linking words như “because” hoặc “for example”.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to travel by motorbike or public transport because these options are faster and more convenient for long distances. For example, bicycles are mainly used for exercise or short trips in quiet neighborhoods.

× Well absolutely I used I used to have a bike but two but it's four wheels at first because I didn't know how to ride a bike.

✓ Well, absolutely. I used to have a bike, but it had four wheels at first because I didn't know how to ride a bike.

Because the student is talking about a bicycle during childhood, the past-tense verb had is needed. It's means it is or it has, so it does not correctly express the past situation here.

× So after my mom after my mom taught me,

✓ So, after my mom taught me, I learned how to ride it.

After my mom taught me is a dependent clause and cannot stand alone as a complete sentence. It needs a main clause, such as I learned how to ride it, to express the complete idea.

× other other vehicle, like motorbike or some public transportation, like a train plan

✓ other vehicles, like motorbikes, or some public transportation, like trains and planes

Vehicles and motorbikes refer to more than one type of transport, so the plural forms vehicles and motorbikes are needed. Trains and planes should also be plural when giving general examples.

× Well, I think no because people nowadays tend to let go by other other vehicle, like motorbike or some public transportation, like a train plan

✓ Well, I don't think so, because people nowadays tend to travel by other vehicles, such as motorbikes, or use public transportation, such as trains and planes.

I don't think so is the correct structure for disagreeing with a question. The phrase let go by is not a correctly formed expression for transportation; travel by or use public transportation should be used instead. The sentence also needs clearer coordination between the two transportation options.