Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, I did not have a bike when I was child a bike license, a two wheeler license will get at age eighteen after that all our riding
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, of course bike is very popular in our country and most of the people used to ride Ram bike most of the people used bike for riding
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Answer the question directly in the first sentence and avoid combining unrelated ideas. Use correct grammar, such as “when I was a child” and “I could get a licence at the age of eighteen.” Explain briefly that you could not legally ride a motorbike until you were eighteen. Avoid repeating “bike” and make the meaning clear with linking words such as “because” or “so.”
Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because people can only get a two-wheeler licence at the age of eighteen in my country. So, I started riding a motorbike after I became an adult.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Begin with a clear answer and then give one or two specific reasons. Use the plural form “bikes are” and avoid repeating “most people” and “ride.” Replace the unclear phrase “Ram bike” with a specific type or brand, if appropriate, and use natural expressions such as “use bikes for commuting” or “travel around the city.”
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are extremely popular in my country, especially among young adults and office workers. Many people use them for commuting because they are affordable and convenient in heavy traffic. Motorbikes are particularly common in large cities.
× No, I did not have a bike when I was child.
✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.
The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child because you are referring to one period of your life.
× A two-wheeler license will get at age eighteen.
✓ You can get a two-wheeler license at the age of eighteen.
Will get does not correctly express the general possibility of obtaining a license. Use can get to express permission or possibility. The sentence also needs a subject, you.
× A two-wheeler license will get at age eighteen.
✓ You can get a two-wheeler license at the age of eighteen.
Use at before a specific age. The corrected sentence also uses the natural expression at the age of eighteen.
× After that, all our riding.
✓ After that, we could ride legally.
The original phrase has no properly conjugated verb. Add the subject we and the verb could ride to make a complete sentence.
× Of course, bike is very popular in our country.
✓ Yes, of course, bikes are very popular in our country.
When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular noun bike.
× Of course, bike is very popular in our country.
✓ Yes, of course, bikes are very popular in our country.
The plural subject bikes must take the plural verb are, not the singular verb is.
× Most of the people used to ride bikes. Most of the people used bikes for riding.
✓ Most people ride bikes, and many people use them for transportation.
The question asks about bikes' popularity now, so use the present tense ride and use instead of the past expression used to ride. Used to describes a past habit that is no longer true or is not necessarily true now.
× Most of the people used to ride bikes.
✓ Most people ride bikes.
When making a general statement about people, the natural quantifier is most people. Most of the people usually refers to a specific group that has already been identified.