Bike— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-09-30 16:39:49

Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I have a bike when I were a child. I it was a peculiar bike and it had it had only three wheel as I can remember

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

I don't think so there are a lot of side walks from people's but not for bikers and in my city there are a lot of cars that's not safe for people who ride a bike.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.5Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.5Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Puntuación: 48.0

Sugerencia: Answer directly in the past tense: use “had” instead of “have” and “was” instead of “were.” Avoid restarting the sentence and repeating words such as “it had.” Use the natural expression “three wheels” and add one specific detail about the bike or how you used it. A clear two-sentence response would be more effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a rather unusual bike because it had three wheels, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 52.0

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country.” Then explain the reasons using linking words like “because” and “also.” Correct “side walks from people's” to “sidewalks for pedestrians,” use “there are” with plural nouns, and say “the large number of cars makes cycling unsafe.” Give a specific reference to your city to make the answer more developed.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because there are very few bike lanes. In my city, most sidewalks are designed for pedestrians, and the large number of cars makes cycling quite unsafe. As a result, many people prefer to drive or use public transportation.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question refers to a period in the past, so use the past tense had instead of the present-tense form have. The past form of be for the subject I is was, not were.

1: Singular and plural issue

× It was a peculiar bike and it had only three wheel, as I can remember.

✓ It was a peculiar bike, and it had only three wheels, as I can remember.

The number three requires the plural noun wheels, so wheel must be changed to wheels.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× There are a lot of sidewalks from people's but not for bikers.

✓ There are a lot of sidewalks for pedestrians, but not for bikers.

Use for to indicate who something is intended for. From does not express this meaning. Also, pedestrians is the appropriate noun for people who walk.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× In my city, there are a lot of cars that's not safe for people who ride a bike.

✓ In my city, there are a lot of cars that are not safe for people who ride bikes.

The relative pronoun that refers to the plural noun cars, so the verb must be are, not is. Because the sentence describes people who ride bikes in general, the plural noun bikes is more natural.

Vocabulario

Safe— Secure; Unharmed; Cautious; Harmless
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