Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. I, I, I would have a chair, a bike when when I were child and I have learned it, but I know, I know indeed.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, very popular. Everyone use it. Everyone understand everything, everything, everything, everything.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan başlıyor, ancak “I would have a chair” ifadesi anlaşılmıyor ve “when I were child” yerine “when I was a child” kullanılmalı. Ayrıca “I know” ve “indeed” tekrarları cevabı doğal olmaktan çıkarıyor. Bisikletiniz olduğunu, bisiklet sürmeyi öğrendiğinizi ve bununla ilgili kısa bir ayrıntıyı net biçimde ekleyin.
Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned to ride it when I was about six. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 25.0Sugerencia: Soruyu yanıtlamanız olumlu, ancak “Everyone use it” yerine “Everyone uses them” demelisiniz. “Everyone understand everything” soruyla ilgili ve anlamlı bir ifade değil; bu bölüm çıkarılmalı. Bisikletlerin kimler arasında popüler olduğunu, hangi amaçlarla kullanıldığını ve mümkünse bir neden veya örnek ekleyin. Tekrarlardan kaçının ve en fazla 3–4 açık cümle kurun.
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and university students. Many people use them to exercise or to travel short distances because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. However, cycling is less common in busy city centers because of heavy traffic.
× I would have a chair, a bike when when I were child.
✓ I had a bike when I was a child.
The question asks about a past experience, so the simple past tense is needed. Use had instead of would have and was instead of were because the subject I takes was in the past tense.
× I were child.
✓ I was a child.
The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a. The correct phrase is a child.
× I have learned it.
✓ I learned how to ride it.
The answer describes a completed past experience, so the simple past learned is more appropriate than the present perfect have learned. The phrase learned how to ride it clearly expresses the intended meaning.
× Yes, very popular.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular.
The original response is a sentence fragment because it does not contain a verb. Add the subject bikes and the verb are to form a complete sentence.
× Everyone use it.
✓ Everyone uses them.
Everyone is grammatically singular, so the verb must be uses, not use. Because bikes are plural, use the plural pronoun them instead of it.
× Everyone use it.
✓ Everyone uses them.
The pronoun it refers to one singular thing, but bikes refers to more than one bike. Therefore, the correct pronoun is them.
× Everyone understand everything.
✓ Everyone understands everything.
Everyone is a singular indefinite pronoun, so the verb needs the third-person singular ending -s: understands.