Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
As I remember, I used to have a bike like when I was sixteen years old. Me and my friends we usually like have run across the neighborhood with our bikes like for one or two hours.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, I think bicycles have been very popular in my country. They are common form of transport and a popular childhood pastime because they are inexpensive and easy to use.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and use more natural grammar. Say “I had a bike when I was about sixteen” instead of “I used to have a bike like when I was sixteen years old.” Avoid the incorrect structure “Me and my friends we usually like have run”; use “My friends and I used to ride around the neighborhood.” Also, avoid repeated fillers such as “like,” and add a specific detail about where you rode or how you felt.
Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was about sixteen. My friends and I used to ride around the neighborhood for one or two hours after school. It was a fun way to spend time together and get some exercise.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 85.0Sugerencia: Your answer is direct, well organized, and supported by clear reasons. To improve grammatical accuracy, add the article “a” before “common form of transport.” You could also make the response more specific by mentioning who commonly uses bikes or giving a brief example from your country.
Ejemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. They are a common form of transport and a popular childhood pastime because they are inexpensive and easy to use. In particular, many children ride them to school or around their neighborhoods.
× Me and my friends we usually like have run across the neighborhood with our bikes like for one or two hours.
✓ My friends and I usually liked riding around the neighborhood on our bikes for one or two hours.
The subject pronoun I must be used, not the object pronoun me, when the speaker is part of the subject. The natural order is My friends and I. Also, the repeated subject we is unnecessary.
× Me and my friends we usually like have run across the neighborhood with our bikes like for one or two hours.
✓ My friends and I usually liked riding around the neighborhood on our bikes for one or two hours.
The answer describes a past habit, so the verb should be in the past tense: liked. Use past-tense verbs consistently when talking about activities you regularly did as a child.
× Me and my friends we usually like have run across the neighborhood with our bikes like for one or two hours.
✓ My friends and I usually liked riding around the neighborhood on our bikes for one or two hours.
After liked, use a gerund with the -ing form: liked riding. The form like have run is not grammatically appropriate here. Practice common verb patterns such as like or liked + verb-ing.
× They are common form of transport and a popular childhood pastime because they are inexpensive and easy to use.
✓ They are a common form of transport and a popular childhood pastime because they are inexpensive and easy to use.
The singular countable noun phrase common form requires the indefinite article a. Use a or an before a singular countable noun when referring to one example of something.