Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng chưa rõ nghĩa do dùng sai từ “thief” (có thể bạn muốn nói “three”), sai cấu trúc và lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp rằng bạn có xe đạp, sau đó thêm màu sắc và cảm xúc bằng các câu đơn giản. Dùng thì quá khứ khi nói về thời thơ ấu: “My mother bought me...” và dùng cấu trúc đúng “I really liked it” thay vì “I very, very like that”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was about three, my mother bought me a new pink bike. I really liked it because it was bright and fun to ride around my neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã đưa ra sự so sánh giữa quá khứ và hiện tại, nhưng câu trả lời chưa nhất quán: phần đầu nói xe đạp phổ biến trong quá khứ, phần cuối lại kết luận “So yes” mà không giải thích rõ hiện nay. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ đúng (“were”), tránh lặp từ “comes”, và diễn đạt nguyên nhân cụ thể như sự phát triển của xe máy, giao thông nhanh hơn hoặc khoảng cách di chuyển xa hơn. Có thể kết luận rằng xe đạp vẫn phổ biến ở một số nơi, nhưng xe máy phổ biến hơn hiện nay.

Ejemplo: Bikes used to be very popular in my country, especially among children and people in rural areas. However, motorbikes have become more common because they are faster and more convenient for long-distance travel. So, although many people still ride bicycles for exercise, motorbikes are now the main form of transport.

× It is pink by the that I very, very like that.

✓ It is pink, which I like very much.

The original sentence has an incorrect and incomplete structure. The phrase by the that is not grammatically meaningful. Use the relative pronoun which to connect the description of the bike with the speaker's opinion. Also, like very much is the natural word order.

× In the past bikes are very common in my country.

✓ In the past, bikes were very common in my country.

The phrase in the past refers to a finished period, so the verb must be in the simple past tense. Change are to were because the subject bikes is plural.

× But now when the industry comes, comes to the motorbike have to replace the bikes.

✓ But now, as the motorbike industry has developed, motorbikes have replaced bicycles.

The original sentence contains a repeated verb and an unclear clause structure. Use as the motorbike industry has developed to introduce the reason for the change, and use the complete main clause motorbikes have replaced bicycles.

× The motorbike have to replace the bikes.

✓ Motorbikes have replaced bicycles.

Motorbike is singular, but the answer is referring to motorbikes in general, so the plural form motorbikes is required. Bicycles is also a clearer plural noun for bikes in this comparison.

× The motorbike have to replace the bikes.

✓ Motorbikes have replaced bicycles.

The plural subject motorbikes correctly takes the plural auxiliary have. The original combination of a singular subject, the motorbike, and have is not grammatically consistent. In addition, have replaced expresses the change that has occurred up to the present.