Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but now I have after 18 my parents bought me a bike.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
It's definitely because bike bike is the one of the main transportation medium in our country, because most of the people, especially youngster are using by for every purpose for going for the college functions, parties, uh, chill out, everything they are using and also for family, they are using bikes uh, more than.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, give a brief supporting detail (when/how you got the bike), use linking words if needed, and keep it under five sentences. Pay attention to verb tense (use past for childhood), articles, and word order.
Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I only got one after I turned eighteen because my parents bought it for me as a gift. Since then I have used it regularly to commute and for weekend rides.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: Organize your response: give a clear opinion first, then two specific supporting reasons with linking words, and avoid repetition and fillers. Use correct noun forms and articles (e.g., 'bikes', 'young people') and concise phrasing. Limit to 2–4 sentences and include specific examples (commuting, errands, social trips).
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They are an affordable and convenient way to travel, so many young people use them to get to college or meet friends. Families also use motorcycles for shopping and short trips because they're cheap to run and easy to park.
× No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but now I have after 18 my parents bought me a bike.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but now I do; my parents bought me a bike when I was 18.
The speaker mixed present and past tenses. Use past tense 'didn't have' for a past time 'when I was a child' (Grammar problem type ID 6). Also 'a child' needs the article 'a' (article error, ID 22) and 'after 18' is incorrect phrase order; use 'when I was 18'. Use 'do' to refer to current possession and restructure the sentence for clarity. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past for past events), include articles, and use natural time expressions like 'when I was 18'.
× It's definitely because bike bike is the one of the main transportation medium in our country, because most of the people, especially youngster are using by for every purpose for going for the college functions, parties, uh, chill out, everything they are using and also for family, they are using bikes uh, more than.
✓ Bikes are definitely one of the main means of transportation in our country, because most people, especially youngsters, use them for everything: going to college, parties, hanging out, and for family trips; people use bikes more than other vehicles.
Multiple grammar issues: 'bike bike' is repetition and should be plural 'bikes' to match general statement (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'is the one of the main transportation medium' has article and noun-choice errors; use 'one of the main means of transportation' (article and word choice, ID 22/13). 'most of the people' is better as 'most people' (quantifier, ID 14). 'youngster are' should be 'youngsters are' or 'young people' (subject-verb agreement and plural, ID 27/1). Incorrect verb constructions: 'are using by for' is ungrammatical; use simple present 'use them for' to describe habitual actions (present tense issue, ID 6; preposition misuse, ID 11). Also pronoun reference: 'them' refers to 'bikes' (pronoun correction, ID 12). Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, simple present for habitual actions, correct articles and prepositions, and break long run-on sentences into clearer parts.