Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition; start with a direct topic sentence, then add one clear supporting detail with a linking word. Also correct small grammatical issues (e.g., omit duplicate words, add articles and prepositions where needed). Aim for 2–3 sentences and use a natural phrasing.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child because, as a girl, my parents didn't allow it. However, I often played with my brother's bike, and that is how I learned to balance and enjoy riding.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first, then provide one or two specific reasons using linking words. Remove filler sounds (uh) and avoid repeating subjects. Add a specific example or contrast to make the answer more informative and natural.

Ejemplo: Not really. Cars are the main mode of transport in my country, so most people prefer driving rather than cycling. However, some people, especially in coastal cities, cycle for exercise or leisure during weekends.

× Actually I didn't have because as a girl I wasn't allowed to have a bike when I was a child, but I used to to play with my brother's bike sometimes.

✓ Actually I didn't have one because, as a girl, I wasn't allowed to have a bike when I was a child, but I used to play with my brother's bike sometimes.

The sentence needs a direct object after 'didn't have' so use 'one' to refer to 'a bike'. Remove the duplicated 'to'. Add commas around the introductory phrase 'as a girl' for clarity. The verbs 'didn't have', 'wasn't allowed', and 'used to play' are correctly in the past tense, but the extra 'to' is an error and there is a missing pronoun/object. Suggestion: include 'one' to complete 'didn't have one', delete the repeated 'to', and add commas for readability.

× Not that much actually. Bikes are not popular in my country as the main uh, transportation, uh, approach or model is by car.

✓ Not that much actually. Bikes are not popular in my country because the main mode of transportation is the car.

The phrase 'approach or model is by car' is awkward and incorrect. Use 'mode of transportation' and 'the car' for clarity and correct noun usage. This fixes subject-verb and noun choice issues so the sentence reads naturally. Also replace 'as' with 'because' for clearer causal connection.

× Uh, so people they do not have uh, bikes and they have, they use car.

✓ So people do not have bikes and they use cars.

The repeated subject pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and unnatural; remove it. Use plural 'cars' to match 'people' (plural) and to correct agreement between subject and noun. Also simplify wording by removing filler 'uh'.

× However, some people they do practice biking.

✓ However, some people do practice biking.

Again, the pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'some people'. Keep the verb phrase 'do practice' with 'biking' (gerund) correctly. The gerund 'biking' is acceptable here; simply remove the extra pronoun to make the sentence grammatical and natural.