Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (use correct tense and subject-verb agreement), make the response more natural and concise, and add one brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a reason or short example using a linking word (e.g., because, so). Keep it to no more than 3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe. As a result, I usually walked to school or took the bus, and I only started cycling when I was a teenager.

Sugerencia: Clarify ideas and fix grammar and word choice. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details linked with words such as “because” or “for example.” Avoid confusing phrases and keep sentences concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in the Philippines because many people use them for commuting and leisure. For example, there are active online communities where cyclists share routes and tips, which makes me want to try riding more often.

× I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents doesn't allow me to get one.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't allow me to get one.

The main clause is past tense ('did not have'), so the reason clause must also use past tense. 'Doesn't' is present tense and incorrect with the past auxiliary; use 'didn't' for past. Also, 'allow' should remain in base form after 'didn't'. Suggestion: keep verb forms consistent in past-tense narratives by using 'did' + base verb for negatives and questions in the past.

× Yes, I think that bikes are popular here in the Philippines and a lot of bikers were really enthusiastic to share their experience online which makes me also feel that I'm missing something like how bike is enjoying your ball to ride.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular here in the Philippines, and many bikers are enthusiastic to share their experiences online, which makes me feel that I'm missing out on how enjoyable it is to ride a bike.

Several issues: tense and aspect mix ('were really enthusiastic' conflicts with present general statement; use present 'are enthusiastic'). 'A lot of' is informal; 'many' fits. 'Experience' should be plural when referring to experiences of many people. The relative clause was awkward and ungrammatical: 'which makes me also feel that I'm missing something like how bike is enjoying your ball to ride' contains wrong pronouns and word order. Replace with 'which makes me feel that I'm missing out on how enjoyable it is to ride a bike.' Also replace 'bikes are popular here in the Philippines and a lot of bikers were really enthusiastic to share' with a comma and coordinate structure. Suggestions: keep tense consistent for general facts (use present), use correct noun forms (experiences), and use idiomatic phrases ('missing out on', 'how enjoyable it is to ride a bike').