Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure, be concise, and finish your idea. Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, avoid repetition, and add a brief supporting detail with a linking word. Aim for 2–4 clear sentences that directly answer the question and give one specific reason or example.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I always wanted one because my friends rode to school, but my parents were worried about road safety, so they didn’t allow it.

Sugerencia: Correct basic grammar and eliminate filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific details (for example, reasons and an example). Avoid repetition and finish your thoughts. Use vocabulary appropriate to transport context (e.g., 'motorbike', 'delivery', 'ride-hailing').

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use motorbikes for commuting to work and running errands because they are faster in heavy traffic, and ride-hailing services also rely heavily on bikes for deliveries.

× No, I never had a bike when I were a child.

✓ No, I never had a bike when I was a child.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular first-person subject in past tense. Use 'was' with singular subjects like 'I' when describing past states. Suggestion: use 'I was' for past habitual or background descriptions.

× Since my childhood I always wanted wanted a cycle to ride, but my parents were very scared of this.

✓ Since my childhood I have always wanted a bicycle to ride, but my parents were very worried about it.

There is an accidental repetition 'wanted wanted' and inappropriate word choices. 'Since my childhood' requires a present perfect tense ('have always wanted') to link past to present. 'Cycle' is acceptable but 'bicycle' is more natural; 'scared of this' is odd for parents' concern, better 'worried about it.' Suggestion: remove duplicate word, use present perfect with 'since', and choose more natural vocabulary.

× They thought that

✓ They thought that it was dangerous for me to ride.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object/clause after 'thought that.' Provide a full clause to complete the sentence. Suggestion: finish the idea by explaining what they thought, e.g., 'it was dangerous for me to ride.'

× Here's bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

'Here's' is incorrect—likely a contraction of 'here are' placed wrongly. The correct simple declarative is 'Bikes are very popular in my country.' Suggestion: start with the subject 'Bikes' or use 'Here, bikes are...' if you want to emphasize location.

× People use bikes in various purposes like going to shopping malls, offices and many other places.

✓ People use bikes for various purposes, like going to shopping malls, offices, and many other places.

Use 'for' with 'purposes' ('for various purposes'). Also add a comma before the list and include 'and' before the last item. Suggestion: use 'for' + noun and ensure list punctuation.

× In my country people use bikes as Uber or Patau as well and it helps to it helps in faster

✓ In my country people use bikes as a form of ride-hailing service, like Uber or Patau, and they help people travel faster.

The original has repetition 'it helps to it helps', missing article and unclear structure. 'Use bikes as Uber or Patau' needs rephrasing: bikes are used as ride-hailing services. Also ensure subject-verb agreement ('they help') and complete the idea ('travel faster'). Suggestion: remove repetition, add articles, clarify the comparison, and complete the clause.