Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I did") and use past tense consistently. Give one or two brief supporting details with linking words (e.g. "When I was about six, my parents taught me how to ride"). Avoid redundancy and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was about six years old, my mother and father taught me how to ride a bicycle, and I practiced with them in the park until I felt confident.

Sugerencia: Make your opinion direct and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar and concise vocabulary (e.g. "I don't think they're very popular because..."). Include one concrete example or consequence and avoid vague phrases.

Ejemplo: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because the roads are poorly maintained and there is little cycling infrastructure. For example, many streets lack bike lanes, which makes riding dangerous, especially during busy hours.

× Yes I have by when I am young it's allowed when I am like 6 years and my mother and my father, they teach me.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was young. I got it when I was about six years old, and my mother and father taught me.

This sentence contains multiple tense and agreement issues (Past tense issue - ID 5; Present tense issue - ID 6; Subject-verb agreement - ID 27). The student is referring to a past event, so present tense verbs like 'have' and 'am' should be changed to past tense: 'had' and 'was'. 'It's allowed' is irrelevant and unclear; likely the student meant 'I got it' or 'I had it'. Also 'they teach me' should be past tense 'they taught me' because the teaching happened in the past. Suggestions: use consistent past tense when talking about childhood (I had, I was, they taught), add commas for clarity, and replace vague phrases ('it's allowed') with the intended meaning ('I got it').

× For me, I think not much because we don't have a good transport.

✓ For me, I don't think they are very popular because we don't have good public transport.

This sentence has quantifier and article errors and poor sentence structure (Incorrect use of quantifiers - ID 14; Article errors - ID 22; Sentence structure errors - ID 26). 'Not much' is not a natural response to 'Are bikes popular?'; use 'I don't think they are very popular' instead. 'a good transport' is incorrect; 'transport' as an uncountable noun should be 'good public transport' or 'good transportation'. Suggestions: use a clear clause to answer popularity, use 'they' to refer to 'bikes', and choose the correct noun form ('public transport').

× Transportation for the bike, It's gonna be dangerous for people.

✓ Using bikes for transportation can be dangerous for people.

This sentence has incorrect verb form and informal language and needs restructuring (Verb in the -ing form / gerund usage - ID 8; Future tense/informal contraction issue - ID 7; Sentence structure errors - ID 26). 'Transportation for the bike' is awkward; say 'using bikes for transportation'. 'It's gonna be' is informal and 'gonna' should be replaced with 'can be' or 'could be' to indicate possibility. 'Can be dangerous for people' is a clear, formal phrasing. Suggestions: use 'using' + noun for describing purpose, avoid slang like 'gonna', and choose an appropriate modal ('can' or 'could') to express risk.