Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı. Gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden (umm, uh) kaçının, doğru zaman kullanın (geçmiş zaman) ve kısa bir konu cümlesi ile ardından bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Ayrıca maksimum 5 cümle kuralına uyun.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used to ride around the neighborhood. I learned to ride it when I was six, and my parents often watched me from the porch. Riding my bike was my favorite way to go to the park with my friends.

Sugerencia: Cümle yapınız yanlış ve anlamsal olarak net değil. Olumsuz düşünceyi düzgün ifade edin, doğru kelime sırasını ve çoğul/sahiplik uyumunu kullanın. Bir görüş belirtin ve kısa bir gerekçe ekleyin (örnek: altyapı, hava, kültür).

Ejemplo: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people prefer cars because the roads are busy and there are few bike lanes, so cycling is not very safe. However, some cities are beginning to promote cycling to reduce traffic and pollution.

× Umm, actually, uh, yes, umm, when I was a child. I have a bicycle.

✓ Umm, actually, uh, yes, umm, when I was a child I had a bicycle.

The student uses present tense 'have' while referring to a past time 'when I was a child'. This is a tense mismatch. Use the past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: identify the time reference first (e.g., when I was a child) and then use past tense verbs for actions or states in that time. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I think it's no my country bikes and bicycles is not popular.

✓ I think bikes and bicycles are not popular in my country.

There are multiple problems: word order and subject-verb agreement. The original has incorrect placement of 'no' and uses singular verb 'is' with plural subject 'bikes and bicycles'. Also the phrase 'it's no my country' is ungrammatical. Correct structure places the subject before the verb and uses plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: form the sentence as 'I think [subject] are/are not [complement] in my country.' Grammar problem type ID: 27