Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep your answer simple and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then give 1–2 concise reasons. Avoid irrelevant comments and hesitations, and use correct grammar for past situations (e.g., 'my parents didn't agree' or 'my parents didn't want me to have one'). Aim for 2–3 short sentences, and reduce filler words like 'uh' or 'um'.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents didn't agree to buy one for me, so I never learned to ride. As a result, I used to walk or take the bus to school.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) and correct comparative forms (more popular than). Replace vague phrases ('FDG work') with concrete examples (commuting, markets, deliveries). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and easy to park. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute to work and to run errands in crowded city areas. Therefore, bikes are more common than cars, especially in busy towns.

× No, I didn't have any bike because I don't know how to exactly write it back bike and my parents, uh, were not with my decision to buy a new bike for me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I didn't know how to spell 'bike' correctly, and my parents did not support my decision to buy a new bike.

This sentence has pronoun and related reference issues plus tense consistency. 'any bike' is unnatural here; use 'a bike' for singular. 'I don't know' should be past tense 'I didn't know' to match 'didn't have.' The phrase 'how to exactly write it back bike' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is likely 'how to spell "bike" correctly.' 'Were not with my decision' is incorrect; use 'did not support my decision.' Suggestions: keep tenses consistent, use correct verb forms (know→knew), replace awkward phrases with standard verbs (spell, support).

× Yeah, I think so because umm in my country the bikes are more common than any other vehicles because as it is more comfortable to ride and people often use their bike for their FDG work and it is quite popular than other vehicles.

✓ Yes, I think so because in my country bikes are more common than other vehicles; they are more comfortable to ride, and people often use their bikes for their daily work, so bikes are quite more popular than other vehicles.

This sentence has singular/plural agreement and comparative phrasing issues. Use 'bikes' and 'their bikes' consistently for plural. 'Any other vehicles' is unneeded; use 'other vehicles.' 'As it is more comfortable' should refer to plural 'they are more comfortable.' 'People often use their bike' should be 'their bikes.' 'FDG' is unclear; likely 'daily' or 'everyday' — replaced with 'daily.' Also 'quite popular than' is wrong; correct comparative is 'quite more popular than' or simply 'more popular than.' Suggestions: maintain consistent number (singular/plural), use correct comparative structures, and replace unclear abbreviations with clear words.