Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 질문을 반복하지 말고, 과거형으로 직접 답해야 합니다. 간단한 주제 문장으로 시작한 뒤, 필요하면 이유나 기억을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 예: ‘Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight. It was…’처럼 구체적 세부사항(어떤 종류의 자전거, 누가 사줬는지, 자전거로 무엇을 했는지)을 포함하면 점수가 오릅니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I often rode it to the nearby park with my friends.

Sugerencia: 질문을 그대로 반복하지 말고 의견을 분명히 말하세요. 주제 문장(찬반이나 정도)을 먼저 말하고, 연결어(for example, because, in contrast)로 구체적 근거나 예시를 덧붙이세요. 예: ‘Yes, they are popular because…’ 또는 ‘Not very popular, but…’

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and weekend markets where cyclists are common.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Student used present tense 'Do you have' with a past time reference 'when you were a child'. Use past simple 'Did you have' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past situations: 'Did you have...'. Avoid mixing present tense with past time expressions.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is already correct. The present simple 'Do you think' and the present adjective 'are popular' appropriately ask about a current general opinion/state. Suggestion: No change needed; ensure subject-verb agreement ('bikes are').