Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on fluency with fewer hesitations, clearer sentence structure and concise details. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitive fillers (umm, like) and pronoun confusion. Also keep answer within 3–4 coherent sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. I had a bike as a child — it was a birthday present when I turned six. My grandfather taught me to ride, and we often cycled to the park together to enjoy family time.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, organized response: state your opinion, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'environmentally friendly', 'use bikes' or 'choose cycling'). Use concrete examples and one concise summary sentence.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. For example, shared bike systems are widespread, which makes cycling convenient for short trips. In addition, more people choose bikes because they want to be environmentally friendly and improve their health.

× Umm, yes I do.

✓ Umm, yes I did.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. 'Do' is present tense; change to 'did' to match the time reference and maintain tense consistency. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past situations (e.g., 'Yes, I did').

× I did have a bike and it was like, umm, I, I remember it was my birthday present when I was six years old.

✓ I had a bike, and I remember it was my birthday present when I was six years old.

Using 'did have' is unnecessary for a simple past statement; the simple past 'had' is more natural. Remove filler 'it was like' for clarity. Keep past tense 'remember' describing a past recollection is acceptable but 'I remember' is present-tense used for recalling; it's fine stylistically, but ensure primary verb is past. Suggestion: Use simple past ('had') for past possessions and avoid filler phrases.

× So my, and also at that time my grandfather, he taught me how to ride a bike and normally we went to the park for riding together and then for, you know, like to enjoy our family time.

✓ Also, at that time my grandfather taught me how to ride a bike, and we normally went to the park to ride together and enjoy family time.

The original sentence has redundant subject pronoun 'my grandfather, he' which is ungrammatical in standard English. 'For riding' and 'for to enjoy' are incorrect verb patterns; use the infinitive 'to ride' and 'enjoy' directly. Remove filler phrases for clarity and correct word order. Suggestion: Avoid redundant pronouns, use 'to' + base verb for purpose (e.g., 'went to the park to ride and enjoy family time').

× Umm, yes. I think nowadays like many people, like for example in China, we have the shared bikes and many people actually because of their like the changes in their living habits, they become more environment environmentally friendly and they care about the environment.

✓ Yes. I think nowadays many people, for example in China, use shared bikes. Because of changes in their living habits, they have become more environmentally friendly and care about the environment.

Mixing present continuous and awkward phrases causes problems. 'We have the shared bikes' is better as 'use shared bikes' to express current habitual action. 'Become more environment environmentally friendly' has incorrect word form 'environment'; use the adverb 'environmentally' with 'friendly' and 'have become' fits the change from past to present. Remove redundant 'many people actually' and reorder for clarity. Suggestion: Use clear present simple for habits ('use shared bikes') and correct adverb/adjective forms ('environmentally friendly').

× So they choose to use more public transportation such as bike.

✓ So they choose to use more public transportation, such as bikes.

'Such as bike' is ungrammatical—'such as' should be followed by the plural 'bikes' here or 'a bike' in a singular construction. Also add a comma before 'such as' for readability. Suggestion: Match noun number after 'such as' with intended meaning ('bikes' for general examples).

× And also because of the change of lifestyle, they become healthier actually.

✓ And also, because of changes in lifestyle, they have become healthier.

'Become' should be in present perfect ('have become') to show a change resulting from lifestyle shifts up to now. 'The change of lifestyle' is awkward; 'changes in lifestyle' is more natural. Suggestion: Use present perfect to describe changes that started in the past and continue to the present ('have become healthier').