Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (umm) and incorrect verb forms. Mention whose bike it was, describe a specific memory, and explain why it was special. Keep to 3–4 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child that I borrowed from my cousin. I used to ride it every weekend with my grandfather along the village road, which made those afternoons very memorable. Because of those rides, the bike reminds me of happy times with my family.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give clear reasons and a brief prediction. Use linking words (for example, however, because), correct plural and article use, and complete comparative phrases. Be specific about where bikes are used and why popularity might grow (e.g., cost, traffic, environment). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I think bicycles are becoming more common but are not yet very popular in most cities. In some towns people use bikes for short trips to the market, but many still prefer motorcycles or cars because they are faster. However, I believe bike use will increase in the future because they are cheaper, better for traffic congestion, and more environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I have back from my childhood and it just kept from my cousin I and I love it very much because we just umm we have riding our bike with my with us grandpa.

✓ Yes, I have it from my childhood; my cousin kept it for me, and I loved it very much because we used to ride our bikes with our grandpa.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and word order ('from my cousin I' is incorrect). 'I have back from my childhood' is awkward; use 'I have it from my childhood' or better 'I had it from my childhood.' 'Kept from my cousin' should be 'my cousin kept it for me.' Use consistent pronouns (my, our) and correct verb forms ('used to ride'). Suggestion: organize ideas into clauses and place pronouns directly before the nouns they modify.

× So this is a really emotional activity to do and I just really remember in a good.

✓ So it was a very emotional activity, and I remember it fondly.

The phrase 'remember in a good' is incorrect adjective/adverb usage and wrong collocation. Use 'remember it fondly' or 'remember it well.' Also adjust tense to past ('was') to match 'childhood' context. Suggestion: replace vague 'in a good' with specific adverbial phrase like 'fondly' or 'with good memories.'

× I am not sure about discussing so much because in our country there are lots of bicycle to go around the town, but in my country there are some like market things but it is not that popular yet.

✓ I'm not sure; in our country there are many bicycles used to travel around towns, but in some areas, like markets, cycling is not that popular yet.

Problems: tense and countability/word choice. 'There are lots of bicycle' is singular/plural mismatch and wrong article—should be 'lots of bicycles' or 'many bicycles.' 'To go around the town' is better as 'used to travel around towns.' The second clause repeats 'in my country' unnecessarily; combine and clarify. Suggestion: use 'many bicycles' for plural and adjust verbs to present general truth ('are used').

× But I just believe that in the future it's just going to be more popular and many people just going to choose them because they are more.

✓ But I believe that in the future it will become more popular, and many people will choose bicycles because they are more convenient and cheaper.

Multiple issues: incorrect use of 'just' (unnecessary), missing auxiliary verbs ('going to choose' needs 'are' or better 'will choose'), and sentence is incomplete ('because they are more' what?). Conjunctions and sentence connectors are awkward; replace with clearer structure: 'I believe... it will become more popular, and many people will choose bicycles because they are more convenient and cheaper.' Suggestion: include the comparative object ('more convenient/cheaper') and use proper future form ('will').

× in our country there are lots of bicycle to go around the town

✓ in our country there are lots of bicycles to go around the town

'Bicycle' is singular; after 'lots of' the noun must be plural: 'lots of bicycles.' Suggestion: use plural nouns after quantifiers like 'lots of' or use 'a lot of' with plural as well.