Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb tenses, and avoid fragmented phrases. Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also fix vocabulary (e.g. 'back bike' -> 'bicycle' or 'bike', 'gearbox' is okay but 'rear wheel' if intended). Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was ten years old, I got a bicycle with a large rear wheel and a simple gearbox, and I often rode it with my friends after school. Because the area near my house was flat and safe, we would cycle to the park every weekend, which helped me become confident on two wheels.

Sugerencia: Answer directly to the question first, then explain with specific reasons and linking words. Use correct nouns and prepositions (e.g. 'motorbikes', 'used as', 'mode of transportation', 'a waste of time'). Avoid vague phrases like 'use the bag'. Keep sentences coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in Thailand. They are widely used as a main mode of transportation because the traffic in cities can be very heavy, so riding a motorbike is faster and more convenient than driving a car.

× Yes, I did when I was.

✓ Yes, I did.

The original sentence 'Yes, I did when I was.' is incomplete and contains an unnecessary clause fragment 'when I was.' Remove the fragment so the short answer correctly responds to the question. If the speaker wants to add age, they should complete the clause (for example, 'Yes, I did. I was 10 years old.').

× 10 years old, I got a back bike with a big wheel and also have a gearbox inside.

✓ When I was 10 years old, I got a black bike with a big wheel that also had a gearbox inside.

Multiple tense and word choice issues: '10 years old, I got' needs a time clause 'When I was 10 years old' for natural order. 'back bike' is likely a misspelling of 'black bike.' The clause 'and also have a gearbox inside' mixes present tense 'have' with past 'got'; change to past 'had' (or 'that also had') to match past context. Rearranged to combine clauses clearly.

× I ride it with my friends.

✓ I used to ride it with my friends.

The speaker refers to a past habit, so present simple 'I ride' is incorrect. Use 'used to' to indicate a past, habitual action. Alternatively, 'I rode it with my friends' is also correct but 'used to' emphasizes habit.

× If you mean a motorbike then yes because in Thailand we use the bag for main transportation because sometimes the traffic is really heavy and it can be waste of time.

✓ If you mean motorbikes, then yes. In Thailand we use them as the main transportation because traffic is often very heavy and it can be a waste of time.

Several issues: 'a motorbike' vs general topic should be plural 'motorbikes' (or 'a motorbike' with 'then yes' is possible but context favors general). 'we use the bag' is incorrect word choice; likely 'them' (referring to motorbikes). 'for main transportation' should be 'as the main transportation' or 'as a main form of transportation.' 'sometimes the traffic is really heavy' is acceptable but 'often very heavy' is smoother. 'it can be waste of time' needs article and noun form: 'a waste of time.' Also pronoun agreement: refer back to motorbikes with 'them.'