Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (past tense consistency, subject-verb agreement) and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and long confusing clauses. Focus on concise, correct sentences (maximum 5).

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it with my sister’s help, but at first it was difficult and I fell a few times. Because of that bad experience, I stopped riding for about two years before trying again.

Sugerencia: Work on verb forms, word choice, and coherence. Start with a direct opinion, then support it with clear, specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, therefore, so). Use correct past/present verbs and avoid filler sounds. Keep answers concise and well-structured.

Ejemplo: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. This is because there are few dedicated bike lanes, so most people only cycle in parks for leisure. As a result, cycling is mainly a weekend activity rather than a common way to commute.

× Yes, I have the bike when my when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Also remove the repeated 'when'. Suggestion: Use past tense for events completed in the past: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× I still remember that when I was young I try to ride a bike while my sister helping me.

✓ I still remember that when I was young I tried to ride a bike while my sister helped me.

The actions are narrated about the past, so verbs must be in past simple: 'try' -> 'tried', 'helping' -> 'helped'. Use consistent past tense for both clauses. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past actions: 'I tried to ride a bike while my sister helped me.'

× However is what very bad experience and then suddenly I stop ride a bike for two years.

✓ However, it was a very bad experience and then I stopped riding a bike for two years.

Multiple issues: missing subject 'it' and wrong verb forms. 'Is' should be 'was' to indicate past. 'Stop ride' is ungrammatical; use past simple 'stopped' plus gerund 'riding' to show cessation. Also add comma after 'However'. Suggestion: Ensure subject is present and use 'stopped' + gerund: 'It was a very bad experience and then I stopped riding a bike for two years.'

× Umm, I don't think so.

✓ Umm, I don't think so.

This sentence is grammatically correct and appropriate for the present opinion; no change needed.

× I don't really saw people ride a bike around the country.

✓ I don't really see people riding bikes around the country.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb form: 'don't' requires base/present form 'see', not past 'saw'. Also use 'riding' (gerund) for ongoing action and plural 'bikes' for general reference. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual observations: 'I don't really see people riding bikes around the country.'

× They usually because, uh, my country don't have a bike Rick lane.

✓ That's usually because my country doesn't have bike lanes.

Sentence structure is broken by misplaced 'because' and missing subject for the clause. 'They usually because' should be 'That's usually because' or 'This is usually because'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'my country doesn't' not 'don't'. 'Bike Rick lane' seems incorrect; use 'bike lanes' (plural) for general infrastructure. Suggestion: Use a clear subject and correct agreement: 'That's usually because my country doesn't have bike lanes.'

× So usually people will ride a bike in the parks park, which are not really uh have.

✓ So usually people ride bikes in parks, which don't really have them.

Use present simple 'ride' for habitual actions instead of 'will ride'. Use plural 'bikes' and 'parks'. The relative clause 'which are not really uh have' is ungrammatical; replace with 'which don't really have them' (referring to bike lanes). Suggestion: Say 'So usually people ride bikes in parks, which don't really have bike lanes.'