Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct tense and grammar, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct word order and past-tense verbs. Also correct age expressions (“when I was seven”) and avoid repeating the same phrase.

Ejemplo: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. I bought it when I was seven and practiced with my parents until I could ride confidently at ten.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer, correct grammar (use 'they' or 'bikes' not 'he'), avoid fillers and unclear words, and provide specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Replace unclear references like 'Reddit' with intended meaning such as 'use them' or 'ride them'.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many cities offer public bike-sharing systems, and many people use bicycles to commute to work or school.

× Where I was a 7 year old, I bought a bike and I learned how to ride a bike, learn how to ride a bike when I was a 10.

✓ When I was seven years old, I bought a bike and I learned how to ride it when I was ten.

This sentence has tense and phrasing problems and some redundancy. Use 'When I was seven years old' for age reference (correct word order and plural 'years'). Use 'learned' consistently in past tense to match 'bought' and 'was'. Replace the repeated clause 'learn how to ride a bike, learn how to ride a bike' with a single past-tense clause. Use 'it' to avoid repeating 'bike'. Also write numbers under 10 as words ('seven', 'ten').

× Wah, yes, of course, he's one of the most, uh, popular transportation, uh, in my country and uh, lots of countries have have lots of uh, public bikes and a lot of people Reddit.

✓ Yes, of course, they are one of the most popular forms of transportation in my country, and many countries have public bike schemes that a lot of people use.

Multiple errors: subject reference and number agreement ('he's' incorrectly refers to 'bikes'—use 'they are' or rephrase to 'bikes are'). 'Transportation' should be used with 'forms of' to be countable. 'Have have' is a repetition. 'Public bikes' is acceptable but 'public bike schemes' or 'public bike systems' is clearer. 'Reddit' is incorrect verb; likely intended 'use' or 'ride'. Ensure plural agreement throughout ('many countries have', 'a lot of people use').