Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, tense consistency and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid filler sounds and repetitions. Keep the answer to no more than four sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small village where most children played with traditional toys instead of owning bicycles, because families had limited money and there were few paved roads. As a result, I usually walked or ran to visit friends rather than riding a bike.

Sugerencia: Make your main point clear and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, however, therefore) and avoid hesitations. Correct collocations (e.g., "in urban areas" and "ride with apps like Yango") and finish the sentence with a clear conclusion. Limit to three or four sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes and motorbikes are quite popular in my country, especially in urban areas. Many people use app-based services like Yango or motorbike taxis because public transport can be slow or unreliable. Therefore, people often choose bikes for short trips or emergencies.

× No, I don't have MMM bike when I walk outside.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student must use past tense. 'Don't have' and 'walk' are present tense and mismatch the time reference. Also 'MMM' appears to be noise and should be removed. Use 'didn't have' for negative past simple and 'when I was a child' to match the examiner's phrasing. Suggestion: use past simple for habits or states in the past (I didn't have a bike).

× I played with traditional toys when I was a kid because I was raised in village to bike is not in our.

✓ I played with traditional toys when I was a kid because I was raised in a village and bikes were not common there.

Sentence has several problems: awkward clause order and missing articles. 'Was raised in village' needs the article 'a'. 'To bike is not in our' is ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is that bikes were not common there, so use 'bikes were not common there' (past simple plural). Also join ideas with 'and' to form a clear, grammatical sentence. Suggestion: use past simple for past facts and include articles for countable nouns ('a village').

× Bikes are popular in our country, especially in cities area, uh, but nowadays there are lots of bike uh, using Yango in drive without public transport, transportation are too late.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country, especially in urban areas, but nowadays many people use bike-hailing apps like Yango to drive when public transportation is too late.

Problems: 'cities area' is incorrect — use 'urban areas' or 'cities'. 'There are lots of bike' needs plural 'bikes' or better 'many people use'. 'Using Yango in drive' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'use bike-hailing apps like Yango to drive' or 'use Yango'. 'Transportation are too late' has subject-verb agreement and article issues; use 'public transportation is too late' or 'public transport is often late'. Suggestions: choose correct plural forms, correct subject-verb agreement, and use appropriate prepositions and nouns ('in urban areas', 'use', 'public transportation is').

× So whenever we have to go somewhere and it's very emergency, so we.

✓ So whenever we have to go somewhere in an emergency, we use those services.

This sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'It's very emergency' is ungrammatical; use 'in an emergency'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'so we.' Complete the idea by stating the result, e.g., 'we use those services' or 'we take a Yango.' Suggestion: use the idiom 'in an emergency' and finish the clause with the action taken.