Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'bike' not 'buy'), and give 1–2 specific supporting details linked logically. Use linking words (e.g., 'when', 'so', 'because') and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and include a time reference and a short example of a memory or reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was about five years old. I enjoyed riding it with my friends across the street near my house because it felt freeing and helped me make friends. I still remember learning to balance while my older cousin held the seat.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words. Start with a clear opinion sentence (Yes/No/Partly), then give 1–2 specific reasons and an example. Fix grammar (e.g., 'bikes are associated with', 'we often use bikes to go to school') and avoid redundancy. Keep sentences coherent and use connectors like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many children use them to travel to school because parents often work early and public transport can be expensive; for example, most of my classmates rode bikes to school every day.

× Of course I had.

✓ Of course I did.

The student used the past form of the main verb 'have' as a full verb where the short response should use the auxiliary 'did' for questions in past simple. Use 'did' for short affirmative answers to past-tense questions (e.g., 'Did you have a bike?' — 'Of course I did.'). Suggestion: For short answers to past questions, use 'did' (positive) or 'didn't' (negative).

× Of course I had a buy when I was about 5 years old.

✓ Of course I had a bicycle when I was about five years old.

The phrase 'a buy' is incorrect word choice and the structure is awkward. The correct noun is 'bicycle' (or 'bike'), and numbers under ten are often written as words in formal writing. Also use 'had' correctly as past possession. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'bike' or 'bicycle' and write 'five' for clarity: 'I had a bike when I was about five years old.'

× I really like riding across the street close to my house with my friends.

✓ I really liked riding across the street near my house with my friends.

The context is a past narrative ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. 'Close to my house' is grammatical but 'near my house' is more natural. Suggestion: Keep verb tenses consistent with the time period being described; use 'liked' here.

× You know when I start to bike.

✓ You know, when I started to ride my bike, ...

The student mixes present tense 'start' with a past-time narrative. Also 'start to bike' is unnatural; use 'started to ride my bike' or 'started riding my bike.' Suggestion: Use past tense 'started' and the collocation 'ride a bike' for clarity.

× I had.

✓ I did.

This fragment is unclear and seems intended as a short affirmative response. In past simple, the correct short answer to a past question uses 'did' rather than 'had.' Suggestion: Use 'I did' to answer affirmatively about past possession or actions.

× You know, bike associate with every child in my country because the bike we often use the bike to go to school every day.

✓ You know, bikes are common for every child in my country because we often use them to go to school every day.

Multiple issues: plural noun 'bikes' is needed, verb 'associate' is incorrect here and passive voice/plural agreement are wrong. The pronoun 'them' should replace repeated 'the bike.' Also use present simple 'are common' for general truth. Suggestion: Use plural 'bikes', correct verb phrase 'are associated with' or simpler 'are common', and pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition.

× Our parents because our parents are very busy and they work early that earlier than the hour we start to school.

✓ Our parents are very busy and they start work earlier than the time we start school.

The original sentence is fragmented and redundant ('Our parents because our parents'). Use a single clause, correct word order 'start work earlier than', and omit the unnecessary article in 'start school.' Suggestion: Combine ideas into one clear sentence and use correct comparative phrasing: 'start work earlier than we start school.'