Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tiếp theo là một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ; sử dụng từ vựng đơn giản chính xác và các liên từ để nối ý. Cụ thể: (1) Nói rõ là có hay không có xe đạp; (2) Giải thích lý do ngắn gọn, mạch lạc (ví dụ: phụ huynh lo lắng về an toàn); (3) Tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng: had/didn't have).

Ejemplo: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried about my safety, so they always drove me to school instead. Because of that, I rarely rode a bike on my own.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung bằng chi tiết cụ thể và một liên từ để mạch lạc. Cụ thể: (1) Trả lời ngắn và rõ ràng (Yes/No and why); (2) Cho ví dụ cụ thể (học sinh đi học bằng xe đạp, chi phí thấp); (3) Dùng thì hiện tại đơn, tránh từ lặp và âm thốt.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students use them to get to school because they are cheap and convenient, especially in small towns. For example, I often see groups of schoolchildren cycling together in the morning.

× Not really, I don't have own buy where and I was mom because my my parents worry about me riding bike by myself to school and they always take me to school.

✓ Not really. I didn't have my own bike when I was a child because my parents worried about me riding a bike to school by myself, so they always took me to school.

The original sentence has multiple structural and verb tense errors: 'don't have' should be past tense 'didn't have' to match 'when I was a child' (present/past tense issue). 'own buy where' is nonsense and should be 'my own bike' (word choice/order). 'I was mom' is incorrect; the speaker likely meant 'when I was a child' which is already present, so remove. Subject-verb agreement and verb forms: 'parents worry' should be past 'parents worried'. Use of article 'a' before 'bike' is required. Combine clauses with commas and a coordinating conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: break long run-on into shorter clauses, keep consistent past tense, use correct articles and word order.

× Yes buy a well known in my country every student who have owned bike exception me yes uh uh, for example, most of parents who who.

✓ Yes. Bikes are very common in my country; almost every student owns a bike except me. For example, most parents...

This sentence has pronoun and noun issues and poor structure. 'buy' should be 'bikes' (word choice). 'a well known' is incorrect placement; use 'very common' or 'well known' with a noun. 'every student who have owned bike' has subject-verb agreement: 'have' should be 'owns' or 'have' with plural subject; better: 'almost every student owns a bike'. 'exception me' should be 'except me' (preposition). The trailing fragment 'for example, most of parents who who' is incomplete; use 'For example, most parents...' and complete the clause. Recommendation: use clear subject-verb agreement, correct pronouns/articles, and finish thoughts.