Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep your answer focused and coherent. Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid unclear phrases (e.g. 'practice writing' seems wrong; likely you meant 'practicing riding'). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly and keep sentences concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often learned to ride on my sisters' bikes in the neighborhood, and I enjoyed it very much. Although I fell several times at first, I became more confident after a few lessons.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize ideas clearly: start with a topic sentence stating whether bikes are popular, then give specific reasons and examples. Correct grammar (e.g. 'more cars' -> 'more cars before'; 'seniors ride bikes') and avoid vague or garbled phrases like 'chosen address'. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to connect reasons. Keep to 2–4 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes have become more popular in recent years. Many people choose cycling because it is cheap and good exercise; for example, I often see students and seniors riding bikes home from work or school. This trend has grown as cities add more bike lanes.

× No, actually I didn't own a bike when I was a child, but I don't know how I got to practice writing with my sisters and I do enjoyed it a lot even though I force a lot.

✓ No, actually I didn't own a bike when I was a child, but I don't know how I got to practice riding with my sisters and I did enjoy it a lot even though I fell a lot.

Errors: 'do enjoyed' mixes auxiliary present 'do' with past 'enjoyed' so use 'did enjoy' or simply 'enjoyed' for past tense; 'writing' is wrong word choice for riding a bike; 'force' is incorrect word choice, likely meant 'fell'. Suggestions: Use simple past consistently for past events (I did enjoy or I enjoyed), choose correct verbs (ride for using a bike, fall for losing balance), and avoid unnecessary auxiliaries. Example improvements: 'I enjoyed it a lot' or 'I did enjoy it a lot.'

× Yes, especially during recent years, in the past there were more bike, more cars actually.

✓ Yes, especially in recent years; in the past there were more bikes and more cars actually.

Error: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to agree with 'more' referring to countable items. Also 'during recent years' is less natural than 'in recent years' and items should be joined with 'and'. Suggestions: Use plural forms for countable nouns when comparing quantities (more bikes), and use 'in recent years' for recent time periods.

× But in recent years we can see chosen address and even seniors are right bikes on their way back home and.

✓ But in recent years we can see that young people and even seniors are riding bikes on their way back home.

Errors: 'chosen address' is unintelligible and likely a wrong phrase for 'young people' or 'children'; 'are right bikes' uses wrong verb 'right' instead of 'ride'; sentence ends with extraneous 'and'. Suggestions: Replace unclear or wrong phrases with correct noun phrases (young people), use correct verb 'ride' for bicycles, include conjunction 'that' after 'see' for clarity, and complete the sentence without trailing conjunctions. Also maintain present simple to describe general trends (we can see that ... are riding).