Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer direct and grammatically accurate, use a clear topic sentence, and add 1–2 specific supporting details linked logically. Keep it under five sentences. Correct tense (past) and remove vague phrases like "I don't know how". Use linking words such as "but" or "however" to show contrast and "for example" to give specifics.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, but I practised riding with my sisters and enjoyed it a lot. For example, we used to ride together in the park every Sunday, and although we often argued about who led the way, I learned to balance and ride confidently within a few weeks.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then support it with one or two specific observations or reasons, using linking words like "for example" or "because." Use varied vocabulary (e.g., commuters, recreational cyclists) and avoid repeating simple words like "people."

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes have become very popular in my country, especially in recent years. For example, many commuters use bicycles to travel to work, while families and elderly people ride in parks for exercise, and local governments have built more bike lanes to support this trend.

× No, I don't have one in my childhood, but I don't know how I got to practice the bike with my sisters and it was quite fun actually.

✓ No, I didn't have one in my childhood, but I don't know how I learned to ride a bike with my sisters, and it was actually quite fun.

Problems: present tense used instead of past when referring to childhood (should be 'didn't have'); awkward phrase 'got to practice the bike' should be 'learned to ride a bike' or 'practiced riding a bike'; word order and article issues ('the bike' -> 'a bike'); placement of 'actually' moved for natural flow. Suggestion: use past simple for past events, use 'learned to ride' for acquiring the skill, and choose appropriate articles ('a' for a non-specific bike).

× I fought a lot, but I learned a lot and have a lot of fun with my.

✓ I fought a lot, but I learned a lot and had a lot of fun with them.

Problems: inconsistent tense (mix of past 'learned' and present 'have'); missing object after 'with my' (likely 'my sisters' or 'them') and incorrect pronoun form. Correction uses past tense 'had' to match 'learned' and replaces incomplete 'my' with 'them' (or explicitly 'my sisters') to complete the sentence. Suggestion: keep tense consistent within the sentence and provide a clear object for prepositions like 'with'.

× Yes, especially in recent years I've seen a lot of people riding bikes everywhere, for example on their way back home and in the park, and this includes kids, grown-ups and even older people.

✓ Yes, especially in recent years I've seen a lot of people riding bikes everywhere, for example on their way home and in parks, and this includes kids, adults, and even older people.

Problems: 'on their way back home' is wordy; 'in the park' should be plural 'in parks' to match 'everywhere' and general observation; 'grown-ups' is informal — 'adults' is more natural. Tense 'I've seen' is appropriate for recent observation. Suggestion: simplify phrases for clarity, use plural when speaking generally, and prefer standard vocabulary like 'adults'.