Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (e.g., tense and pronoun errors). Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas. Keep the answer to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe and they rarely allowed children to ride bikes in our neighborhood. Instead, I played with toy cars and trucks at home, which I enjoyed a lot.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid filler words (uh, like) and unclear phrases. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) and precise vocabulary (common, affordable, convenient). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many office workers and students use motorcycles or bicycles to avoid traffic and save money. As a result, you can see them commonly parked outside schools and markets.

× No, actually I didn't have any bike when I was a child.

✓ No, actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Use the indefinite article 'a' with singular, countable nouns. 'Bike' is a singular, countable noun so say 'a bike' rather than 'any bike' in negative past statements referring to a single item. Suggestion: Use 'a' before singular countable nouns: 'I didn't have a bike.'

× Actually, it's know that when it was a child I shouldn't have a bike.

✓ Actually, I know that when I was a child I wasn't supposed to have a bike.

Sentence has incorrect verb forms and pronouns. 'It's know' is ungrammatical; use 'I know'. 'When it was a child' wrongly uses 'it' instead of 'I'. 'I shouldn't have a bike' is the wrong tense/meaning for past obligation; use 'wasn't supposed to' to express past expectation or prohibition. Suggestion: Use correct subject pronoun and past modal expression: 'I know that when I was a child I wasn't supposed to have a bike.'

× And it's something so unusual in Bangladesh and and our parents won't permit us to buy, but yeah, of course we had some toys like cars and trucks, et cetera.

✓ And it was something very unusual in Bangladesh and our parents wouldn't permit us to buy one, but yes, of course we had some toys like cars and trucks, etc.

Pronoun and tense issues: 'it's' present tense conflicts with past narrative; 'something so unusual' is awkward — use 'very unusual'. 'Won't permit' (future) is incorrect for past — use 'wouldn't permit'. 'Buy' needs object 'one' for 'a bike'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent (past) and use appropriate pronouns and determiners: 'It was very unusual... our parents wouldn't permit us to buy one.'

× Uh, yes, obviously bikes are popular in my country 'cause I think this is one of the most uh, PIL used vehicle in our country and uh, like office screen people's even like for city students by bikes for their uses and it brings a lot of like.

✓ Uh, yes, obviously bikes are popular in my country because I think they are one of the most used vehicles in our country, and people, including office workers and city students, ride bikes for their daily needs; they bring many benefits.

Multiple problems: 'this is one' mismatches plural 'bikes' — use 'they are one of the most used vehicles' (subject-pronoun agreement). 'PIL' is unclear; likely 'popular' or 'widely'. 'used vehicle' should be plural 'used vehicles'. 'office screen people's' is ungrammatical; intended 'office workers' or 'people who work in offices'. 'by bikes' incorrect verb 'buy' vs 'ride' — context requires 'ride'. Sentence fragments and colloquial fillers removed and reordered for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural agreement, clear vocabulary, and full clauses: 'Bikes are popular... they are one of the most used vehicles... people, including office workers and city students, ride bikes... they bring many benefits.'