Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Mejora la precisión y la coherencia: evita repetir frases (por ejemplo “I used to”), corrige errores gramaticales (p. ej. “a 4-wheel bike”), y organiza la respuesta con una oración temática seguida de detalles claros. Añade un conector para enlazar la razón y sé más específico sobre por qué es difícil montar en Bangkok (tráfico, clima, falta de carriles seguros).

Ejemplo: I had a bike when I was a child — it was a small four-wheel bike for beginners. However, I hardly ride bikes now because since I moved to Bangkok the traffic is heavy and there are few safe bike lanes, so cycling feels unsafe.

Sugerencia: Evita muletillas (“umm”, repeticiones) y frases poco precisas. Comienza con una respuesta directa (Yes/No) y usa conectores para explicar (for example, because / moreover). Sé específico: describe condiciones concretas (carreteras en mal estado, falta de infraestructura, seguridad) y corrige errores de vocabulario (“bike lane” en singular y “impractical” en lugar de “unpractical”).

Ejemplo: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many roads are in poor condition and there are few practical bike lanes. As a result, people prefer cars or motorbikes for safety and convenience.

× I used to have 4 wheel bike but I don't really ride a bike anymore because since I moved to Bangkok it is very difficult to.

✓ I used to have a 4-wheel bike, but I don't really ride a bike anymore because since I moved to Bangkok it has been very difficult to do so.

The phrase '4 wheel bike' needs a hyphenated compound adjective and singular 'wheel' could be 'wheels' but when used as an adjective it becomes '4-wheel'. Also the clause 'it is very difficult to' lacks an object; add 'do so' or restructure. Use present perfect 'has been' with 'since I moved' to link past action to present. Improve punctuation by adding a comma before 'but'.

× it is very difficult to.

✓ it has been very difficult to do so.

The sentence fragment 'it is very difficult to' is incomplete because 'to' needs a verb; 'to do so' completes the idea. Also 'has been' better expresses an ongoing difficulty starting from a past point ('since I moved').

× The first answer that come to my mind is no, it is not very popular in my country because umm because of the broken roads and very unpractical lane, bike bike lane that.

✓ The first answer that comes to my mind is no; bikes are not very popular in my country because of broken roads and impractical bike lanes.

Subject-verb agreement: 'answer that come' should be 'answer that comes'. Redundant 'because' and filler 'umm because of' should be removed. 'Very unpractical lane, bike bike lane that' is ungrammatical and repetitive; use 'impractical bike lanes'. Rephrase for clarity and correct word order; use a semicolon or comma and reword to match natural English.

× The first answer that come to my mind is no, it is not very popular in my country because umm because of the broken roads and very unpractical lane, bike bike lane that.

✓ The first answer that comes to my mind is no; bikes are not very popular in my country because of broken roads and impractical bike lanes.

The verb 'come' must agree with the singular noun 'answer', so it should be 'comes'. Also adjust sentence to clearly state the subject 'bikes' with correct verb form 'are not'.