Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 発音や話し方に無駄な繰り返し（

Ejemplo: Yes. I had my first bike when I was about twelve. I used it mainly to ride to school, and I taught myself how to cycle, which was fun and helped me become more independent.

× Yes, I, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the auxiliary 'did' unnecessarily with a past simple statement. In English, affirmative past simple uses the past form of the verb without 'did'. Suggestion: use 'I had' for simple past affirmative sentences.

× It, it was actually when I, when I was, I think 12 years ago that that was my first bike.

✓ It was actually about 12 years ago when I got my first bike.

The original mixes word order and tense awkwardly. Use 'about 12 years ago' for a time expression and 'got' (past simple) to indicate acquisition. Suggestion: place the time expression before or after the clause and use a clear past verb like 'got'.

× I used it to go to school and I actually learned it by myself.

✓ I used it to go to school and I actually taught myself how to ride it.

'Learned it' is grammatically possible but sounds unnatural for learning to ride a bike. A more natural structure uses 'taught myself' or 'learned how to ride'. Also include the object 'how to ride' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'taught myself' or 'learned how to ride' when describing acquiring a skill.

× I just.

✓ I just taught myself how to ride it.

The fragment 'I just.' is incomplete (no main verb or object). Complete the sentence with the intended action. Suggestion: finish fragments by adding the verb and object to form a complete sentence.

× Yes, I think, I think bikes are very popular in my country because as a kid we used it to go to school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because as kids we used them to go to school.

Subject and pronoun agreement: 'we used it' is singular while 'we' is plural; use 'them' for 'bikes'. Also 'as a kid' should match 'we' -> 'as kids'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× And also it would it's a good, good exercise for people for for my health, I think.

✓ Also, it's good exercise for people's health, I think.

The original has redundancy ('would it's'), filler words, repeated words and awkward preposition use ('for for my health'). Simplify: use 'it's good exercise for people's health'. Suggestion: avoid redundant words and ensure correct preposition and possessive form 'people's health'.