Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, reduce fillers and repetition, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by a brief specific detail. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., "on my birthday" not "in my birthday"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my birthday, and I treasured it because I loved riding to the park every weekend.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then add one or two clear, specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and vague phrases; use correct collocations (e.g., "traffic congestion", "commuters use bikes"). Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Dhaka, because traffic congestion is severe. As a result, many commuters use bikes to travel faster and save money.

× Yes, of course, uh, when I was a child, I had a bike because I one one day I was crying for uh, these, uh, in my birthday and uh, in my next birthday, my uh, parents gifted me it was, it was one of the best gift for me because I had an uh, great attraction attraction.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, I had a bike because one day I was crying for one for my birthday, and on my next birthday my parents gifted it to me. It was one of the best gifts for me because I was very attracted to it.

Multiple past-tense events are described, but original sentence has awkward wording and repetition. Use simple past consistently (had, was crying, gifted). Correct 'in my birthday' to 'for my birthday' and 'in my next birthday' to 'on my next birthday'. Change 'gifted me it' to 'gifted it to me' for correct object order. Use 'gifts' plural and 'attracted to it' for natural expression. Suggestions: keep verbs in simple past, use correct prepositions (for/on), and place objects correctly after 'gifted'.

× it was, it was one of the best gift for me because I had an uh, great attraction attraction.

✓ It was one of the best gifts for me because I had a great attraction to it.

Phrase 'one of the best gift' requires plural 'gifts' because 'one of the' selects from a plural set. Also 'attraction attraction' is repetition and missing preposition; use 'attraction to it'. Suggestion: use plural after 'one of the' and include appropriate prepositions.

× Yes, of course. I think bikes are very popular in my country, mainly in the overcrowded city in Dhaka.

✓ Yes, of course. I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the overcrowded city of Dhaka.

Original 'mainly in the overcrowded city in Dhaka' is awkward. Use 'especially' to highlight and 'city of Dhaka' or 'the overcrowded city, Dhaka'. Also 'in the overcrowded city in Dhaka' repeats 'in'. Suggestion: simplify to 'especially in the overcrowded city of Dhaka'.

× Dhaka is the overpopulated and there and there are a lot of traffic in the road.

✓ Dhaka is overcrowded, and there is a lot of traffic on the roads.

'Overpopulated' is acceptable but 'the overpopulated and there and there are' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use adjective 'overcrowded' for natural speech. 'A lot of traffic' is uncountable so use 'is' not 'are'. Use preposition 'on the roads' not 'in the road'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with uncountable nouns and choose correct prepositions.

× So office going or school going people are using this to remove to.

✓ So people who go to offices or schools use bikes to get around.

Original uses awkward noun compounds 'office going' and 'school going' and incorrect verb phrase 'are using this to remove to'. Replace with 'people who go to offices or schools' and use 'use bikes to get around' for natural meaning. Also change tense/aspect to simple present for habitual action. Suggestion: use clear relative clauses and idiomatic verbs like 'get around'.