Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then give one or two specific supporting details (age, type of bike, training wheels, when you stopped using them). Use correct words (bike, not bag) and simple past tense consistently. Reduce fillers (uh) and avoid unclear phrases like “and they right now.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was ten and it had training wheels at first. After a few weeks of practice, I learned to ride without them and used the bike for fun around my neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason and an example. Begin with a short opinion sentence (Yes/No and why), then explain with two specific reasons (common transport modes, who uses bikes) using linking words like 'because' or 'mainly'. Avoid vague words and fillers, and use correct vocabulary (transportation, taxis, delivery workers).

Ejemplo: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars, motorbikes, or taxis for daily travel. As a result, bikes are mainly used by delivery workers or for short leisure rides in parks.

× I did have a bag uh, when I was 10 year old and it had a supporting wheels, not only two wheels uh, I can ride without them uh, and they right now.

✓ I did have a bike when I was 10 years old and it had supporting wheels, not just two wheels. I could ride with them then, and I can ride without them now.

Errors: 'bag' should be 'bike' (wrong word choice, but focus on grammar list: singular/plural and number words), '10 year old' needs plural 'years' and hyphenation as an adjective (ten years old). 'a supporting wheels' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'wheels' — article and noun number must agree; use no article with plural: 'supporting wheels' or 'a set of supporting wheels'. 'not only two wheels' is awkward; 'not just two wheels' is natural. Tense/ability: original mixes present and past awkwardly; use 'could ride with them then' (past ability) and 'I can ride without them now' (present ability). Suggestions: ensure noun and article agree in number, use 'years' after age, match verb tense for time reference, and choose correct noun 'bike' instead of 'bag'.

× Not really a lot of people do transportation, uh, with, uh, pets and car taxi, uh, the only bike uh, use uh, people who are in delivery person like this.

✓ Not really. A lot of people travel by car, taxi, or on foot. Bikes are used mostly by delivery workers.

Errors: 'do transportation' is incorrect collocation; use 'travel' or 'use transportation'. 'with pets and car taxi' misuses prepositions and nouns; correct is 'by car' or 'by taxi' and 'on foot' if intended. 'the only bike use people who are in delivery person like this' has multiple errors: word order, articles, and noun forms. 'delivery person' should be plural 'delivery workers' and 'used by' is the correct passive/active phrasing. Suggestions: use correct prepositions for transport ('by'), use appropriate nouns and plural forms, and simplify sentence structure to 'Bikes are used mostly by delivery workers'. This correction follows the preposition and sentence structure conventions.